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Reviews for Summer Heat

By : Chiruken
  • From ANON - P.C. on July 16, 2005
    Personally, I think Ed was way too rough. But it turned out alright^^Oooo, is there going to be a 'next time'?=)
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  • From ANON - ya home gurl again on July 15, 2005
    dang i had to read that a second time it left me breathless oooooohh i wish that was me
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  • From ANON - ya home gurl on July 15, 2005
    damn that was hot i couldnt believe that you made that such a good story i loved it
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  • From ANON - Enula on July 14, 2005
    That was hot. This has to be one of the best Ed/Winry lemons I've ever read. Although it could be said that Ed was a little OOC...I loved how you portrayed him. The whole demanding, rough, yet sweet attitude...yeah, huge turn on; it made the whole story that much more enjoyable. You did an excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2005
    Ooh.. I like your eye for details, And it was quite long. I'm quite impressed
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  • From ANON - Chibi Usa on July 07, 2005
    great fic, who to see more from you soon

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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 07, 2005
    oh my god, i can barely breath from how sexy and demanding edward was!!! sheesh, you know when you get so into something, it's almost funny? i'm laughing at myself: i was whispering these encuragements to ed and i've NEVER done anything half as pathetic as talk to fanfic charactrers before. this should just tell you how fabulous this was. nicely nicely done!!!
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  • From MissB on July 06, 2005
    Wonderful. Absolutly wonderful. You have a very nice writing style. You described everything beautifully and sensually with just the right amount of emotion behind those descriptions. Keep up the good work.

    -B
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  • From ANON - sterlingwings900 on July 06, 2005
    Winry was being so indecisive, and Ed was bring so dominatrix....IT WAS HOT! WOW, I LOVED IT! Gosh, Winry kinda pissed me off in this fic, but I can't blame her for being mad; I mean if the guy that I loved for so long didn't notice me to the point that I gave up on him, and then one night all of a sudden he was coming on to me, I would be pretty confused! But I'll make an exception with Ed, he's so sexy! I really did love this fic! Are you gonna make another one? PLEASE DO!
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