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Reviews for Summer Heat

By : Chiruken
  • From ANON - 2 lazy 2 login on August 21, 2014
    Someone made a comic book version of this story. The art's not bad.
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  • From eoNbluesaturNalia on November 02, 2009
    very hot! you're very good in your writing, it flowed effortlessly. do you have any association with aquarina?
    http://summerheat.smackjeeves.com/comics/588288/page-01/
    i don't know and i don't care, but i love having the visual as well as the written version. they both have their perks ;)
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  • From PrincessDoreen on February 02, 2007
    Please forgive if I've already reviewed this story. I finally got to see the doujin AquaSpirits drew for this. It follows the storyline wonderfully, plus it's smutty as all get out. Once I can afford it, I will have a copy for myself, and a couple for friends who also enjoy the EdxWinry pairing. Other than the sex, I enjoyed the realism of this story, Ed and Winry have to iron out some differences before they can proceed further in their relationship.
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    I really should've said that Ed being TOO aggressive was not my cup of tea. I seriously doubt he'd scare Winry like that, so I believe it to be alittle out of character.... though that can hardly be avoided, you're a fan, not the great Hiromu herself. ::laughs::
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    o.O... Damn, that was.... well, it sort of reminded me of a roller coaster really, what with the affection then sudden agression and then right back to affection again. ::inwardly screams,"Make up your mind!" (lol) I think I enjoyed it, though Ed being aggressive is NOT my cup of tea... but it did make things interesting. Everything was sweet at first, then took a turn for the creepy real fast....o.o. Still, very nicely written. ^^ :) (:
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  • From Shadowfan20 on January 06, 2006
    Whoa! This was just awesome...I loved it. So very detailed and Winry and Ed were so in character...They we're making me laugh through the story, of trying to mak up their minds...Overall I thought it was very good Ed/Win story! Definitely keep up the good writing skills..:)
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  • From ANON - Rookie_Hunter on December 29, 2005
    That was really good!! I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story and that I hope that you write more!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on December 21, 2005
    WOW That was AWSWM!

    Well if that's how you spell awsum?

    Man...this fic was soo detail it...soooo not out off character....soooo amazing

    You made it sound so reswl i could of allmost feel i was there watching them (Really but please don't flame me)

    I'm not very good at writing Lime fics...but a vwery good reader you can count on that.....and I know a awswum fic when I see one I tell you and this is one of the top ones!
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  • From ANON - koolyanimegirl on October 04, 2005
    Have to write this review, u deserve it! This fic was hottness and u can write freakin good. I was so caught up in the story I couldn't hear my parents call me. U don't understand this was like the best Ed and Winry fic ever! I read half of them so far, but Ed's potrayle, was so hot man. Yeah he was like crazy rough, and he kinda scared me, I felt like I was Winry, but I think he's sexy like that. I like rough bad boys. Okay...well um...the best. I will read sequel now ^_^
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  • From ANON - Reihn on August 21, 2005
    oh pleaseplease, for the love of all that's holy, write Dom!Winry next?! i would love you so soo much!

    Ed's personality and the way he talked kind of reminded me of Inuyasha..
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  • From ANON - Dreamscapes on August 11, 2005
    I am intrigued by your extensive detail!! Very touching. :)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 02, 2005
    This fanfiction was awesome. I reallly enjoyed reading it. Winry/Edward is a very nice couple to read about.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2005
    This was extremely well written, however my only concern with the story is that it really sounds nothing like Ed when he's doing the extreme amounts of demanding. Once again, very well written, but somehow I kept imagining that the writing/actions would have been more appropriate for some other possible character. However, I can overlook that and see how great this piece was on its own and acknowledge writer creativity. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Innocent_Aerith on July 17, 2005
    This fic is AWESOME. Oh my God. This si the most turned on I have been in a long time~ argh. Damn you! Keep up the good work, you are truly gifted...so I'm jealous. j/k
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2005
    uhm it started off good, but then it lost my intrest about 1/4 down, its a very long chapter adn thats always good, but too much rambling and not enough actually hapening. this one of the first no Yoi Fullmetal alchamists and it seems good, but u grag it out fo rtoo long =/
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