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Reviews for Aduration (A Union or Combination into One)

By : sailormac
  • From Safir84 on February 09, 2008
    Awe, you've yet again made an awesome story, I more than loved it! The plot was great as well as the portrayal of the characters, especially Ed and Russell, so very true to the anime). I especially loved how you described Russell, dead on really, hehe!

    And I totally loved their relationship, the whole way from not being friends to becoming more than just friends, haha, now that was fun and so adorable!

    The banter was awsome as well, I loved it so very much and the smut was so freakin' hot. I also really loved the way you had them taking their time and that they were talking during it, (seeing as most writers doesn't include that). But you did and I love you for that and so much more, laughs!

    Thanks for sharing such a brilliant story with us, and so very well written at that, good job!




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  • From ANON - Naria on October 29, 2005
    YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY^_^

    Best. Fma Fic. Ever.

    WOOT!! I can't tell you how impressed I am with this masterpiece!! Oh my GAWD!!!! It was fluffy, but not too fluffy, angsty, but not too angsty, and damn it was sexy!! ^_^ It was a harmonic blend of Elric vs. Tringham anger, love, and sarcasm! If that made any sense...I have to say this is my all time favorite FMA ficcy now! Perfect ending! Perfect adventure!! Perfect smut! The boys were just so damn cute! And by the by, thank you for saying they made love without intercourse! People just don't get that!! You can make love without stickin' it in! ^_^ Good times!! I loveded it! I am now a permanent fan of yours, so expect more reviews in the future! BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 24, 2005
    please do another one with these two. I love the way you write so much.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on July 14, 2005
    I very good story! The writing, plotting and characterizations were great. The slow, building of a trusting bond between the boys was well done: from antagonists, to begrudging respect, trust, friendship and a dolp of raging hormones --> great! I especially like that you did not fall into the trap that so many other writers tend to fall into: that if it's lust, it must be love. Here, it seems as though both recognize that yes, lust is definately there, but so is friendship. The both have the patience now to see and hope it develops into something more.

    I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings. 8-)
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 14, 2005
    oh man, that was absolutely fantabulous. Even better than the first two. I loved this as well as a few of your other fics. I did get ur e-mail thank you for sending it and your welcome for the well deserved review. Im surprised you havent gotten more reviews for this, its absolutely believable and well thought out. Doesnt just dive right in with no plot or lead up like most do. And the way you portrayed their 'first' times and such just...yeah, im rambling. Well i obviously loved this very much so keep up the good work and i cant wait for the follow up
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  • From ANON - mmmslash on July 13, 2005
    OK, now THAT is how it's done! How beautiful. And it wasn't just PWP. The plot was great, the buildup to the relationship was wonderful. Very believable, not just a random tumble into sex that a lot of stories end up being. Really really beautiful. I loved it. Please continue? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on July 13, 2005
    ok, now its really just plain cruel to leave it hangin like that. The lemon scene was just absolutely incredible, not that the rest of the story wasnt just as wonderful. I love this, of the few R/E fics ive read this is the absolute best. Please hurry and update, im dying to know what happens next...Oh and keep up the good work.

    TaTa
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  • From ANON - realroymustang on July 12, 2005
    very good so far...keep it up!!
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