Click Here!

Reviews for Once A Thief

By : Kali
  • From ANON - icestar on August 13, 2005
    UPDATE! WHEE!

    lovely, lovely chapter. teh angst... ;_;

    poor takao... :glomps Yami FireKali: im sitting on tenterhooks to see how this ends up.

    :thumbs up:
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Hannah on August 07, 2005
    I was so excited! I thought there was going to be a lemon!

    I was in Spain for 2 weeks with no computer *cries* but imagine my happiness when I got back and there were 2 new chappies to Once A Theif!!

    A toast to our lemon queen! *raises glass*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2005
    Wow!! That was a great emotional chapter! Please continue!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - silverfox on August 05, 2005
    very cute and emotional chapter great keep up the great work can't wait to read what happens next so update soon
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lo on August 05, 2005
    that was a very sweet chapter. I like your writing, so keepup the good work. Nice job, very nice job.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - icestar on August 05, 2005
    oh, yay, update. ^_^

    lovely new chapter, so cute.

    :thumbs up:
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Blackrose on August 05, 2005
    I'll say. The name and word even have the same letter beginning it. Nice chapter. I'm glad they've made up. Looking forward to the next part. Will Tyson fess up though? Or does Kai find out?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - studio on August 05, 2005
    argh! You updated before I reviewed chappie 2! lol, that's my fault for being lazy though, so I should probably quit whining. Hm, so we've discovered the reasoning for Tyson being called Takao in this huh? You are such a clever little bugger of a writer. Really, you are just damned clever. Awww, Kai babbling was just adorable... I was just like all 'awwww'.. tee hee.. Yay! Fluff with meaning, what a wonderful combination, perfect for a friday arvie when I feel like doing none of my homework or assignments and just sitting around reading fanfiction - I'm attempting to write a bit of September, but it's just like... meh. - and playing the Sims2.

    Have fun with writing the next chapter, and there'd better be a next chapter or... or something that I'll think of later....

    ~studio sprite
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lo on July 31, 2005
    great work, your stories are soooo good. From your plots to your character development, and I have never come acroos someone who can descibe an outfit as well as you, love your descriptive writing style. Keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Fyrbyrd on July 27, 2005
    Let me start by saying that I really enjoy your work, sorry I haven't said so before this. And this is shaping up just as good, and I very much look forward to more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kari_remon on July 27, 2005
    Very good fic you have here!
    I'm liking it so far, goes a bit different from the normal AU fics around here, them being agents and all. Though I'm a bit surprised, when I read the summary I was expecting Kai to be the thief, he always seemed quite agile in comparison with Tyson. Why does he change is name anyway, some sort of cover-up identity maybe? I'm curious about what happened to Kai and Takao/Tyson, whatever, how they became lovers and where parted. Tyson's reaction seemed a bit excessive, but, he's Tyson, I guess that says it all... Tala seems a bit ooc, too friendly for is usual self. He doesn't seem to have a big part in the story, or maybe I'm just getting this feeling from you going too fast. It does look like it's going to fast, specially if you are making Rei and other character apear and fall in love, since love is something that takes time. And why the obcession with each other anyway? The casual conversation between Wyatt and Tyson was well done, though a bit descriptive for a normal talk between two people, though I understand you had to explain it like that, but from where I stand, I'd gotten the impression someone was threatening his family. Or was it Wyatt who had the wrong idea? I'm curious on who the bad guy is, with Voltaire dead, it doesn't leave many beyblade baddies out. And what about the rest of the Demolition Boys, are they showing up? Guess I have to wait and see, no?
    Keep up the good job, can't wait for more
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    Will can explain everything to Takao? Hurry with the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yueh Kitsune on July 25, 2005
    one of the decent Beyblade fanfics that i accually want to read at the moment. i was a little worried that this was another shot, elementary writen plot but you pulled it off pretty good so far. update soon, you left an evil cliffy in your wake.

    Yueh Kitsune (if i hear "monsieur" on more time i will kill someone i swear)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Blackrose on July 25, 2005
    I'm sure you're story is gonna be real good. I love TyKa and this one has a good buzz to it. Whoever would've thought Tyson would be the theif. Hope he doesn't get in too much trouble. Looking forward to reading the next part.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - K.c on July 25, 2005
    I love it you have to write more it's so mysterious and I can't wait to see what Tala does when he gets back because he'll be able to smell Tyson and then they'll know he's the thief. Anyway write more soon I love it
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!