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Reviews for Vegeta\'s First

By : hibaakaiko
  • From vala21 on May 16, 2007
    Love it, litle dash of angst and a evil Kakkarot. I hope it will be a good ending and I really REALLY hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2006
    brilliant story! just please don't let kakarott win! raditz is so kawaii in the story that he can't die!
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  • From ANON - SSJ-Lover on September 01, 2005
    OMG OMG OMG!!! you must continue asap!!! i love it, the conflict, the love, the lust!! please update soon!! *jumping with joy*
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  • From ANON - Kitty Chan on August 13, 2005
    what in the name of Sai is Vegeta's problem?! I don't care how much he is in lust, someone kidnaps him and all he has to do is talk dirty to get him to comply? Vegeta is a fucking slut and and easy lay if he just rolls over for Raditz after he kidnapped him. I don't agree wiht that. Vegeta should have done something other than get his ass plowed.
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  • From ANON - josephine on August 11, 2005
    ahh!!! no raditzu can't go to jail!! update soon!
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  • From ANON - josephine on August 04, 2005
    wow goku is a bad brother in this fic but neway i still love it! i can't wait to see what happens update soon!!
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  • From ANON - josephine on August 03, 2005
    noooooooo chapter 2 is over.....i wanna read more!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bulma90_13 on August 02, 2005
    I love vegeta/raditz pairings!! My fav.
    dont just leave it like this, though!
    you need to continue!
    how does vegeta react to his father's info!?
    more more MORE!
    raditz seemed very taken with vegeta, so realistic!
    and vegeta's first was a good title choice. i'm horrible at titles.

    bulma90_13
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  • From ANON - Rogue on August 01, 2005
    Ouch!!! Ow ow ow!

    Damn!

    That was an awesome story.....hot and sexy and completely entertaining!

    But that last sentence! Oh...my....that hurt even me...

    Ouch!!!

    After all that...and he was just paid to do it! There has to be another part to this!
    I've got to see what Vegeta's reaction to that will be!


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  • From ANON - josephine on August 01, 2005
    I have to know what happens next!!! I hope this isn't a 1 shot because I HAVE to know what happens!!
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