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By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - Payne no Akuma on August 14, 2005
    Oh my God! I'm sorry its already too late, if you even think about stopping with this story, I'm sorry but I will come after you....somehow...but now seriously. I just love where this is going, I am really lovin' the way you express a sexually active Sloth and Greed, I'm sorry that part with Al and Sloth together, that scene had me on the edge and the relationship with the Elric siblings, their seems to be a seed of hatred planted in their tight bond and your making Greed really now how to nurture it. Keep up the goo....oh who am I kidding you're awesome just don't stop.

    Bye-bi
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  • From ANON - Drunk_Avril on August 13, 2005
    This is an amazing story. Your manipulation of the characters, the writing stlye, the way you capture such raw emotion without just writing sex is beautiful. This is a higher class of writing than most of the rest of the stories found on sites like these, and I can't wait to see the next installment. Keep writing! Please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2005
    alrighty! not a bad piece of work here. hehe.. can't imagine the outcome thought. i wan more roy/ed!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on August 12, 2005
    More! More! This is getting really good! I can't wait to see what Greed's gonna do to him...I'm loving this fic! ^_^ I hope you update some more soon! EM
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 11, 2005
    OHHHHHHH MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOODDDDDDD!!!!!!!! wow... massive cliffhanger there o_O hurry and update please w/ some Greed/Roy ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chiruken on August 11, 2005
    Wow. Just...wow. Such detail, such plot...wow. Every bit of this fic has had me completely engrossed. Simply amazing imagery and the way you've twisted the plot around is pure art, like a finely sculpted piece of clay molded into the form you wish it to take. I'm in awe.

    Can't wait for future updates.

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From ANON - Mel on August 11, 2005
    Ack! Poor Roy! ...hehehe....Update please! *drools*
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  • From ANON - RaveEchidna on August 11, 2005
    Velvet Mace-sama please more? I know i saked that not to long ago but i keep looking at the page hopeing to find more. Its like a drug and I am addicted to it. I have to say i love the way you handle Greed and Roy. (though werre he not such an ass i would almost feel sorry for Roy at the moment)
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  • From ANON - KittyYasha on August 11, 2005
    great story o_o i must say, this is one of the best ones i've ever read. *claps* please update soon!
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  • From Kirie on August 06, 2005
    OOOH!!!! I'm completely hooked XD. Keep it up!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Tromkehra on August 06, 2005
    Heh, you put this up on LJ :D! Mew X3! Update soon I wanna read more XP!
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on August 05, 2005
    This...is a really intriguing story. Reminds me of one of those mystery/detective stories of a guy going in undercover, but ends up getting in deep--really deep. I definitely want to see where this goes! Keep the chapters coming! :3

    EM
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  • From ANON - RaveEchidna on August 04, 2005
    Please tell me you are going to update this soon as you can? Its really good and i would love to see more?
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  • From ANON - purple_llama on August 03, 2005
    Excellent story so far; I'm looking forward to future chapters.
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  • From ANON - metal goat on August 02, 2005
    Wow, this is a really good story! I normally don't like AU, but this is pretty good. I really hope to see more from you ^^
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