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By : VelvetMace
  • From ANON - dewdrops on August 07, 2009
    I...love...this...story...so much...
    It is an amazing tale and I look forward to reading it all the time. Everything about it is well-done and captivating and just so wonderfully full of plot and I don't even know what else.
    I love it-in summation.
    But I fear more and more, as the days go by, that this may be an abandoned story.-Don't get me wrong!-maybe you do intend to finish and I'm just being an ancy, impatient little jerk about it-but on the off chance that you didn't plan to finish this, I had to write you this email. You know, just in case and whatever. Think of this as a desperate plea and prepare for some seriously pathetic begging in-
    3, 2, 1-
    Ok, Velvet Mace. I understand and respect that as a writer it is completely your choice to write what your muses and you collaborate on and want and I understand that some people get bored with their work (which I hope not), or they get frustrated and think it's not up to par(which would be silly because it's amazing), and some just are far too busy to bother with a recreational activity such as writing fanfiction (and I know you have kids and a life so I can totally understand). BUT-this is a proposal for you to continue if you could find it in you heart to do so-if you don't already plan to.
    I am willing to do as much fanart for your story as you would ever want. I know you have lots of fans and LOTS of people to do fanart and make cool emoticons and things for you and I am definetly not the best artist and I've never actually drawn sex scenes BUT IF THAT'S WHAT IT TOOK-I'd do it in a second. Seriously, you could tell me to 50 fanart drawings of the craziest sex ever and it's take some practice but I'd have to do it. AND I'D DO IT GLADLY!

    But I totally respect whatever choice you make-I mean, this is YOUR baby and of course if you are done with it I will be sad and cry a little while, but I wish you good luck on all your writing adventures and exploits.

    Have a good day!
    -dewdrops
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  • From dewdrops on June 15, 2009
    My goodness, MY GOODNESS. This is an AMAZING story you're writing here. The characters are all so wonderfully IN-character and this fucked up situation is nothing short of creatively fantastic. I am completely fascinated by what's going on here.

    You sure are putting everyone through the ringer. It was no farce when you said you were going for as many pairings as possible-and I salute you. For not only being able to write amazing sex-scenes with astronomically mind-fucking proportions, but to be able to pull it off with PLOT. And a very mysterious, good plot at that. I am very curious about where this is going-what a creative and interesting idea and take on things.

    Your dialogue for Greed is irresistible. I love-deep in my very soul-villainy.-when it's good, I don't like that shit-I like twisted and chilling and Greed's got that in spades.

    Fucking incredible. Your characterazation is awesome and the continuation of action is thrilling and your writing style is rockin' my sox.

    I do hope you continue this because I would be so sad if it stopped here with so much excitment ad potential.

    Best of luck!
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  • From maiafay376 on September 05, 2007
    Since you took the time to leave such a nice review, I figured to return the favor.

    This fic is quite the guilty pleasure, and I'm pleased to have a different spin on the Roy/Ed pairings that overwhelm this category. You keep everyone in character right down to the Chimeras and I love how you made Greed this twisted yet, strangely endearing villain. Your writing is better than what I expected; not trying to be rude of course, but writers of high caliber on a fanfic site are few and far between. I'm wondering how Roy will end up after all this is over since he is slowly (it's always better when the taming is slow) accepting his predicament and new place in Greed's family. I think even now he's changed in ways he's probably not aware of. Will Ed have a relapse of rebellion toward the end? Or will Greed somehow end up the lesser of the two evils?

    Interesting questions, and if AFF will bother one day to have the recommendations back, I would add this story. The only thing that took away some enjoyment was that character thoughts sometimes aren't in '' or italicized. This mainly in the beginning chapters only. But you mix plot with the raunchy sex, and that's a feat many here also can't perform. It's either PWP or too much plot; never a good mix of both.

    Since we don't have a reply feature to reviews, I would take this time to thank you for the kind words you made toward Rare, and more importantly your insistence that I didn't make Leon a canon Sue. When I wrote that AN, I was being very hard on myself about Sues in general, and honestly thought I had made one with him. Glad people disagree. LOL. I hope you took the time to read Dark Ashes as well, even though I'm in the process of rewrites.

    I'll be taking a gander at your other fics soon and keeping this one bookmarked.

    ~M
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  • From nalamacleod on February 10, 2007
    Such a great story that I spent all night reading it. I hope you keep adding to it cause I love your twist on things. THank you so much for it, its such a pleasure to read your writing.
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  • From ANON - E on December 22, 2006
    Got to chapter fifteen before I have comments and there it is:

    ‘Wow.’

    That’s really all I can say. You have left me speechless. So much so that I have had to go back and watch the anime because of this and.. Just wow… This is one of the best fan-fictions I have ever seen. I love it. I have to say, the plot is amazing and I love the way you have made so many pairings but linked them all together in the past and keep the characters well.

    Please write more!

    -Gives you a Ed shaped cookie.-

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  • From ANON - Choxsterr on December 02, 2006
    I really like this chapter. It has a great setting and plot between Archer and Kimblee. I would really love to see more of this in the future.
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  • From ANON - ursweetheartles on November 20, 2006
    eeeekkkk you dont know how long we've been waiting for updates to this story, i almost /died/
    you should do more becaaaaaaause ... uh ... we love you? :p

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  • From ANON - Dana on July 07, 2006
    you better continue!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - katie on July 06, 2006
    I really love all of your works. please keep writing more of pets and your other stories. Once again i really love your writing style and creativity.
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on May 31, 2006
    I just love this story. I can't remember if I reviewed the last time I read but I can't wait for you to update more. I like what you've done with the story and characters. They all seem very in character to me and everything flows well. Plus the lemons are just great! Hehe. I enjoy all the kink and it fits well with what you're doing. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jewel on March 14, 2006
    mmm.... wonderful fic, perfect for late night reading (glaces at clock) or should I say midnight reading?
    Update when you can and keep the good work up with your descriptions!
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  • From ANON - Aquastorm on January 31, 2006
    You almost put every pairing in the fandom and mixed it in a single story...

    One word: Smut-tastic. ;)
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  • From ANON - kimblygirl on January 11, 2006
    more archerxkimbly please. that fic was great and all your other ones. i still feel sorry for roy. i hope it has a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Averydisturbedlittleboy on January 09, 2006
    pleas upday! its been forever! and i love this fic! its soooooo good and there have been no new chapi in forever.
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  • From ANON - fullmetalyoai on January 07, 2006
    please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next
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