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Reviews for She'll Be Whatever She Wants to Be

By : angelwarrior1
  • From AmaSk8 on March 03, 2008
    Alright I will be be a critic and a good reviewer xD. First off I like angst stories as well infact thats all I write, because I can't write realy happy stories for some reason, lol. I don't know. Anyways that was a plus. I loved the story line and the fact that it wasn't completely the DBZ way. Like Pan being goth. However I do think it was slightly rushed, and that can be a problem, BUT I will see past that because I want to know what happens next! I didn't exactly look and see when this story was last updated >.> but oh well. I still want to know, lol.

    Also I agreed with your rant about that flamer and cutting. I got your back on that disagreement.

    Update soon!!
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  • From on April 30, 2007
    i love the story...and you hit the nail on the head with cutters, i used to be one...well once a cutter always a cutterthe uge is still there and is hell to fight. and i have several suggestions for songs for Pan's band: "Understanding", "Away From me" "October" "Missing" "Farther away" "Lies" "THe Only one" and "Exodus" All of them by Evanscence and from all her CDs including Origin and Away from home...

    Sakura
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  • From Fourshotchild on February 21, 2007
    I'm enjoying your story! Keep it up.
    I'd like to see how the Son family changes
    back now that Gohan is normail once again.
    Plus, there was a promise of a Trunks fling
    and the battle of the bands. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 18, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Morghainn on December 18, 2006
    I read the first chapter and it was good, but I'm just really not into angst. With that said, I can't correctly review this story since its not a genre that I read on a daily basis. But, the main reason that I'm leaving this review is to say that the review before mine? (Written by someone named Chloe, I believe)It was completely uncalled for. If that person does not like angsty stories than they do not need to read it. Flames are completely useless if the person leaving the flame does not normally read that type of story. And, by the way that Chloe made it sound, she(he?) does not read this type. Anyway, my whole point to this was that you should disregard any and all flames that trash angst stories if that person doesnt like them to begin with. I'm not trying to put Chloe or anyone down, I just think that it's plain rude of someone to do that if its not a genre that they like.
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  • From ANON - Chloe on December 16, 2006
    All I needed to decide this was a teen angst piece of shit was read the summary. You did a VERY good job of summarizing this. Of course it would have been easier had you simply said "Utter shit", but you went to great lengths to warn me how terrible this story is.
    Cut the teen angst shit.
    It will get you nowhere.
    If you are anything like your pathetic representation of Pan, stop now. People like that are pathetic and need to get lives. Am I saying you should pity yourself and think you're a horrible person? No.
    I'm saying STFU and live your goddamn life like you love it, because otherwise it's a waste.
    You've got a life, don't bitch and moan about it. If something's wrong with it, make it better.
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  • From ANON - Dave on December 10, 2006
    Just finished reading the story so far. Gotta say, it was intresting, and a darker side of Pan one would never think of. Considering it's my first every angst read, I'm gonna look at moreo f ya work =D

    Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Twilight Garden on December 09, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story so far. I like how you made the story your own and made it unique and different from the many stories out there. This Twilight Garden says that you must update soon.
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  • From ANON - desra43 on December 04, 2006
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anastrianna on December 03, 2006
    it's all good keep it up your doing great i relly love it
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  • From ANON - A.J. on December 02, 2006
    I'm so glad you decided to update this story again! This dark side of Pan is so different from how she's normally portrayed that I can't help but be drawn in. Please continue because you're doing a great job!
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  • From ANON - midnight21 on November 06, 2006
    This story is rather well written too. please update!
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  • From ANON - FourShotChild on August 23, 2006
    I'm usually not that much into emo/goth
    stories, but your's is very eye catching!
    I hope to see more chapters in the future!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 14, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - julie on January 01, 2006
    please continue this story. it is one of my absolute favourites!
    and please let gohan suffer - thank you very much.
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