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Reviews for My Mate

By : icekitsune
  • From ANON - Sandraccoon on September 26, 2006
    Oh never mind. Firewall. Sorry. Great Fic though. I love wolfen Gundam boys. Yummmm.
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  • From ANON - sandraccoon on September 26, 2006
    I can't seem to find chapter 2 of this fic.
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  • From ANON - demonkitty7002 on December 15, 2005
    I love this story. Please update soon. i want to find out what is going to happen next between the pairings.
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  • From ANON - naga on November 30, 2005
    I enjoyed your story, and I can't wait for the next update ^-^. I'm totally into 1x2, 13x6x5, and 3x4, so your story is like a dream come true XD. I hope you continue with this story.
    Um, I'm just kind of curious, and I really, really don't mean to be rude or anything but...are you open to spelling suggestions? Because you kept using the wrong there. The one you want to use is "their", and you missed more, but that was the must obvious mistake. The ones you missed are:
    in Chapter One: spins- should be "spines"
    cought- should be "caught"
    the- should be"they"
    seperated- should be "separated"
    wishpered- should be"whispered"

    in Chapter Two: scearmed > screamed
    custumary > customary
    egg's > eggs
    suasage > sausage
    stepd > stepped
    him self > himself
    suspicions's > suspicions
    normail > normal
    where > wear
    you > your
    posseion > passion or possession
    slik > slick or silk

    in Chapter Three: pluses > pulses
    witch > which
    ether > either
    some where > somewhere

    Again, I really don't mean to be rude, I just thought you would like to know. You have some sentence structure errors in the first two chapters as well, but I think I'll stop being a butt-head now :(. And I'm sorry if I appear that way, and I really do enjoy your story, but I really thought you might appreciate someone telling you that you misspelled some stuff. Please correct me if I'm wrong, I won't do it again. Well bye now...KEEP WRITING!!!!


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  • From ANON - kay on November 23, 2005
    i love this story i cant wait till you post the next chapters i love that heero and the guys are werewolfes looking for their mates keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on August 26, 2005
    seems good ..keep going...keep it up
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  • From ANON - Carrie on August 11, 2005
    mmmmm, please continue. I see so many wonderful possibilities! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on August 11, 2005
    looks promising, and i'd love to see more of the story! ...though that last little phrase in the prologue i'm not sure what it is...i don't know much japanese ^^...
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  • From ANON - LilBlackNiteCat on August 09, 2005
    Wahh!! I love your idea!! Don't get discourage about needing a beta (those things are easy to fix) or not! If your story has prefect grammar and etc, but sucks, it'll still suck. So the important thing is to come up with good story lines (which you did!!! ^_^) than if you want to go for a beta ... Anyways, just want to say pleaseeee updateee!! I love this chapter and can't wait to find out who the other two wolves are.
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  • From ANON - Lady_Frisselle on August 09, 2005
    I think you have a good start here. I would like more details but I'm annoying like that... :) Anyway I want to see where you are going with this so please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Alex on August 09, 2005
    This is a very promising beginning. I have a couple of suggestions to make (and you can tell me to shove it) your work better. One, try using the writing program that comes with your systems, i.e. Microsoft Word or whatever. Two, don't be afraid to ask for a beta. The site offers betas and they will help you tighten your work up, correct any problems with spelling, grammer, word usage, ect.

    I really have enjoyed the beginning and can't wait to see where you'll take us next.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on August 09, 2005
    Ninmu Ryoukai if I remeber is mission accepted.

    Mmm ... not bad.
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