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Reviews for The Pact

By : Chiruken
  • From Safir84 on February 19, 2008
    Awesome fic you've got here, I really liked it! The plot was more than great and so was the description of Ed and Envy, okay, so they're a bit OOC but if they weren't none of this would ever had happened, so... Good job on that! The banter was awseome and very realistic, furthermore the fic itself was very well written.

    I only have two things to say though, which I thought could have been better; for starters, longer chapters'd have been nicer and secondly where's the much awaited smut. Oh well, I thougth it all was extremely funny so that pretty much makes up for the lacking of both the sex and longer chapters, I guess.

    Okay, so I do have one more question; was that the ending, huh?! If it wasn't, please write more, pretty please...and I'll love you forever, laughs!
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  • From ANON - Yuukio on January 03, 2007
    I love the story so far, just hoping that you would write longer chapters if it is not too much to ask of you. Good work!
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  • From ANON - Anya on January 05, 2006
    Very good and interesting story!!!!!
    Hope your mother would get well soon. Hold on and everything's gonna be ok.
    Hugs
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2005
    this great so far and um funny if a little creepy
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2005
    I like it so far. I want to know what the deal is!!! It doesn't seem like there are enough Envy x Ed fics. Thanks!!
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  • From InuKagnSessy on October 25, 2005
    this story is pretty cool. funny and sexy wrapped into one. i enjoyed it and cant wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2005
    Very nicely written. Please continue with the good work.
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  • From ANON - Rydia on October 03, 2005
    Interesting. Very well written, I like the skipping back and forth between your characters so that you can get a feel for what they are both thinking. I do believe you have OOCed the characters a little bit, but then again, that was in the disclaimer so I guess I can't complain. :> Besides, the characters are very mallable in the series, and I know that my interpretation of the characters is by no means law. I liked the characterization, and how the plot is going. Envy/Ed in any sort of consensual form had really never crossed my mind until I read this fic. I especially liked the little bit with Roy at the end, made me laugh a lot. :) Good job, and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - fullmetalyoai on October 02, 2005
    this is getting good. I thought I was going to die when he said sling. @.@
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  • From ANON - Klebkat on September 27, 2005
    I do like this story (get to the sex, damnit!) but I don't like the overly huge gaps between paragraphs nor the strage, centered heading.

    I do like the fact that you have the last paragraph from the last chapter at the begining of the next chapter. I think it would do you well to devise a more condensed heading and see what's making thoes large gaps if it's not your doing. If you want, my "My Goddess" fic is around Voltron somewhere for you to look at header wise.

    Keep on writing and I hope your mom does well.

    Ai, Klebkat
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  • From ANON - Nay on September 26, 2005
    Write your story, I'm aching to read it! By the way, I hope your mom is on the verge of recovery
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  • From ANON - Nay on September 19, 2005
    Your story is great so far, and I'm sorry to hear that your mom is in the hospital. I'm a huge envy fan, and I am so happy that you decided to write a story with Envy/Ed. I like how you have Envy act affection towards Edward. You don't really think that he would appear that way, but you did a good job keeping everyone in character. I'd love to read more of this story, and I find no errors or flaws whatsoever. Keep going.
    nadine
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  • From ANON - Nay on September 19, 2005
    Your story is great so far, and I'm sorry to hear that your mom is in the hospital. I'm a huge envy fan, and I am so happy that you decided to write a story with Envy/Ed. I like how you have Envy act affection towards Edward. You don't really think that he would appear that way, but you did a good job keeping everyone in character. I'd love to read more of this story, and I find no errors or flaws whatsoever. Keep going.
    nadine
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  • From ANON - lain on September 17, 2005
    *sits back and has a rather fantastic laugh* Phew. This... this is amazing. I simply would love to read more. Envy/Ed is such a fantastic ship.
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on September 15, 2005
    well, that was certainly an entertaining experience. i wish i could have seen mustang's face. ^_^ i hope your mom feels better soon. just update whenever you can, don't rush it. we dont want you burning out.
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