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Reviews for Breathless

By : MasamuneBlade
  • From richgirl22 on September 01, 2008
    i really liked your story but there's just one thing...the word bowels should never be used in a sex scene.lol. other than that it was great
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  • From Diane on November 28, 2007
    "...their erotic hold. Heero looked deeply into Heero's eyes, not knowing what to make..." I believe you mean Heero looked deeply into Quatre's eyes. Also, at the end when they come, "extreme tightness." It's so fun to make the cute little blonde, the sweet one, the aggressor, ne?
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