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Reviews for MineBy : envychan |
- From ANON - Hotary on December 05, 2006
I treid to read it really I did, but it is rather difficult to read when there are absolutely no line or dialogue breaks. Get a Beta to break it up and check your Grammar and it could be a bit better. Work on giving detail as well. Good premise.
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- From ANON - Naomi on December 21, 2005
WWO! That was amazing...sooo (suspiciouse) You're going to maKE A CHAPIE 2 he...heheheh.....................No I'm jsut kidding I'll be waiting anxiouse for chapies 2.....That's cool fic there..hey just beteewn us what does "Cum" means? sorry tought I really don't know
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- From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
I LOVE IT!
MAKE MORE EDxWINRY AND WINRYxWRENCH AND WINRYxDEN!
I LOVE WINRY!
NOOOOOOOOOOO MOOOOORRRREEE ROY AND ED CRAP
THATS SO GAY(THROWS UP)
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- From ANON - The Mad Fan Girl on August 17, 2005
Hm. Just a thought, but maybe seperating things out into paragraphs might make this more readable.
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