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Reviews for Autumn Rain

By : Chiruken
  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 22, 2006
    I forgot to add this, hope the system will let me do it. Your stories are the perfect counterpart to these pics I found over on deviant art. "Hawt" doesn't do it, and even "sensual" is falling short. Just plain old fashioned smut, nothing Hustler centerfold blatant, but it's obvious what Ed and Winry are doing in one of the drawings, just by the body positions and facial expressions.
    www.niak-minstrel.deviantart.com/gallery/
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  • From ANON - Miss Woodford on June 22, 2006
    That was - nasty. Nasty as in good. Edward was very much in character with his short temper and sulking. Those who've only seen the anime would say both were very OOC, but I've been reading the manga and their reactions make more sense to those who've been following Arakawa's original story.
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  • From drake220 on February 02, 2006
    okay, I just reread this b/c it is one of the hottest win/ed fics out there. If you don't write more, it'll be a damn shame. You write these two so well adn so kinky while still maintaining character integrity, it's a joy to read. I can honestly see this happening (if Ed and Win ever had sex and Arikawa-sensei showed it). is it perverted to be jealous of a anime character? I am. i am jealous of Winry. Throughly jealous and the only way to assauge this unseemly emotion is to put up another win/ed. please!?!?
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  • From ANON - Kute koyori on January 27, 2006
    This fic is awesome. win/ed fics are getting rare these days, and you stayed true to ed's character. I'm so impressed, that i just have to beg you to continue this. Do it for the fans!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shen on January 13, 2006
    That was INCREDABLE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I hope you continue to write! You're such a talented and wonderful writer! You explain everything in such WONDERFUL detail! I know I sound repetative... but I can't say enough how much I LOVED your story, and how much I want you to write again! Please write more!

    -Lt. Shen Ryou.
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  • From ANON - Cerasi on January 09, 2006
    I love this! This and Summer heat have to be the best EdxWinry Fic out here! Please write another! ^,^
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  • From ANON - Nessie-chan on October 27, 2005
    I love your stories! And i abseloutly insist you have to write a full season set! (ignore my gruffness- this is my second time at writing this as I cancelled right at the end, stupid laptop...)
    How about Winter Wonderland, where Winry and Ed have a massive snowball fight and to warm themsleves up, they make love in front of a log fire? Or Spring Cleaning (you'd have to work on the title lol) where Winry is told to clean up the house by Aunt Pinako and Ed comes to help, but doesnt really, if you get what I mean...
    Do you like? I'd love to see them! This series rocks! I'll watch in ernest to see what happens! Love you! XxXxX

    ~*Nessie-chan*~

    "Kiri no te de kirisaite tooi hi no kioku wo..."
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  • From Alesyira on October 26, 2005
    Whoa, that was hot.
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on October 25, 2005
    i'm just getting into fma fics and this is in one word: HOT!!! now, i'll admit, i've read my fair share of erotic fics, but oh man, i'm pretty sure this one takes the cake. it's not just about the sex, though that was most defiinitely hot, but there was the genuine love between the two that was quite prevalent and that elevated the story to a whole other level. amazing writing, to say the least. definitely, definitely quite the enjoyable read. guess that's it. way to be an awesome writer
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  • From ANON - Erika on October 08, 2005
    wow!...that is one GREAT story ...i love it!...write more! lol
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  • From ANON - Erika on October 08, 2005
    wow!...that is one GREAT story ...i love it!...write more! lol....~*1*~ ~*eRiKa*~ lyl!
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  • From ANON - koolyanimegirl on October 04, 2005
    did u write more? No,no, no, it cannot end like this. Okay, do like the othere reviewer says, do winter and spring. It dosen't matter, I love ur writing. This lemon is freakin hot. I need more. Do u uhnderstand???? PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Moo-chan on September 05, 2005
    Yay! I love this story and its counterpart! Just rawr baby. ^~

    Since you have the running theme of "seasons" I think you should have winter and spring parts too! Think about it! Winter could be a little fun lemon (winter wonderland, snowball fights, chestnuts roasting over an open fire and whatnot) and the spring one could be about jealousy (springtime = hormones and someone else might be interested in Winry? After all everyone loves a possesive/jealous Edo! ^^).

    Heh, but it's just a thought! ^^;

    Anyway, I just wanted to express my adoration for your Ed/Winry lemons! They're the best out there! Truly kiddo.

    Hope you at least consider continuing your Ed/Winry story, we need more of them!

    Ja ne!

    Moo-chan


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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on August 24, 2005
    ..... I love you. :-D Seriously, you write some of the best EdxWinry PWP EVER! I read 'Summer Heat' and sadly never got a chance to review it. I might go back and re-read it to review it later. But onto THIS story... Very hot, I have to say. And while Ed seems OOC to me in both stories, its not the bad OOC. I expect OOC from characters in fanfics because it generally places the character in situations never seen in the series. In this case, sex. Thus its very believeable to see Ed be all demanding and stuff during sex. In fact, I like that! So its good OOCness. I liked Winry, however, getting her revenge for 'Summer Heat' as well. Nice to see her more dominate and responsive. *Nodnod* I enjoyed how you started the two stories as well and difference between them. A long intor with Ed and then, for this story, a long intro for Winry. Very nice. Your writing is superb, although you do tend to repeat a lot. However I enjoy how lengthy it is. This site desperate needs more awesome EdxWinry lemon fics from talented authors like you. GREAT job! Please write more! It would make me so happy! :-)
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  • From ANON - Salah on August 23, 2005
    Wow....just....wow....that's absolutely brilliant!! I admire your work!!
    Please Keep up the great work and write a whole lot more soon.
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