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By : drake220
  • From ANON - PIKACHU GODDESS on November 18, 2005
    OMGILSHIGGA!!! (OhMyGoddessI'mLaughingSoHardI'mGonnaGetArrested!!!)

    I hope that you do a third chapter!

    EIRICHICK (-.-)=~
    aka
    PIKACHU GODDESS (o';'o)
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  • From ANON - Eden\'s Epitaph on October 22, 2005
    The first chapter was a nice, funny thing. You did great. I did not take the time to read the second chapter for two reason. I'm a lazy girl, and although your story is interesting (and here begins the second reason) reading a chapter that is essencially the same as the previous one is... kind of a mood killer. A story must go foward and never go back (unless flashback scenes are a way for story development... I mean FMA is kind of builed that way, is it no?). But still, that is only my point of view. Besides, that doesn't mean I wont read the second chapter in a few months... But I'm looking foward to a lemon!
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  • From ANON - Alyson Metallium on October 10, 2005
    Oooo, I really liked this! I liked seeing the two different points of view of the same scenario, and I'd LOOOOOVE to see the next chapter. :-D Wonderful how a typical thing like automail maintance can turn so erotic so quickly. ^^ Nummy.
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  • From ANON - NUNICHAN on October 06, 2005
    This was awsome!! I didn't think Winry was bitchy, just a tease and the part when Roy and the others walk in on them was really funny. I really liked it so please update soon I can't wait to read that lemon! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Phoenix on October 01, 2005
    please put hawkeye and roy together in later chapters!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Len on September 25, 2005
    I really love this fic!, itīs so funny and it had to me laughing a lot ^^ , poor Ed, it wasnīt his lucky day at first time, but later it become better, OMG, you made him is SO ADORABLE! *^^* . I like how you made the two pov, it was so exciting to read!, youīve a very good style to write ^^.
    I canīt wait to read the next chapter!. I think you can do a lot of funny situations to do more chapters, but not in pov for other characters... Anyway, you must do lemon, lemon, LEMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.
    Please update soon! ^__________^
    (Forgive my english, please, itīs my second language :
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  • From ANON - Vegan Star on September 24, 2005
    Wow, this story is really good! I wouldn't put Riza's POV in the next chapter though, since it would feel out of place. You can't leave your fans hanging on this last chapter. On with the lemon! LOL.
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on September 21, 2005
    Do you think you could make the next one a lemon? And then maybe have Hawkeye take a hint from Winry's actions? Anyway, I loved your story, it's the first Fullmetal Alchemist story I've read and I am so glad. It was great, you are a wonderful writer, please continue the story. Please?
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  • From ANON - shikari on September 21, 2005
    Raise your hand if you like lemons! ;;blushes;; I can't speak for anyone else but I love this story!! I vote for lemon in next chapter! But that's really up to you to decide. love it love it love it. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on September 20, 2005
    I have to agree with your ending statement, the plot isn't strong enough for anymore character POVs. At least, not strong enough to make the POVs interesting. No offense, of course. I LOVE this story. I just think the way you left off chapter 2, there should be a nice lemon next. Makes sense. :-D Either way, I enjoyed this story very much! I liked Riza here a lot. Someone has to keep horny military men in line. :-D I look forward to chapter 3! Here's hoping Winry gets what she wants!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 17, 2005
    Lemon! Lemon lemon lemon!!!!!

    That's my vote.

    Yeah.

    This is a cute story. I was a little bit...eh...about the chap. from Ed's POV but this one kind of made it work a little better. It turned out well, despite the fact you said it didn't.
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  • From MissB on September 16, 2005
    I intend to take my payment in flesh. Literally.

    Yes she does! I liked the change in POV but you're right, I don't think that you should do another chapter of just that because you're killing us with the UST! Good work!

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  • From ANON - Aleke on September 09, 2005
    This is one of the first stories I've actually laughed out loud in in a long time!
    Rock on with your bad self!
    Anywho, it's awsome, keep up the good work, and please update soon!
    I'll keep an eye on this story, it makes me increadably happy!
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  • From ANON - thebigW on September 09, 2005
    I can't wait for Winry's POV. What was she thinking? At first you had her clueless as to what she was doing to Ed, but by her last comments, she's become a contemptible cock-tease, and while she and Ed have a number of issues to work out, I don't think even he deserves that. If he's seventeen, by now I think he'd be a bit more mature and let her know exactly what she was doing to him. You were right about one thing, Achilles wouldn't put up with that...

    W.
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  • From ANON - ramona on September 07, 2005
    I almost envy her...please post the next chapter soon; it's not every day that I can vicariously sit on Ed's lap...*sigh* ^_^
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