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Reviews for The Phoenix and His Demons

By : DarkSongDesires
  • From angelfoxsam on November 07, 2005
    please update soon, i love the story so far and its been so long since youve updated T.T i love you!!
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  • From angelfoxsam on October 13, 2005
    this is a good fanfic n.n i really like it, please update it soon n.n
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  • From ANON - aspiker on September 27, 2005
    This is a great story you've got here. I'm enjoying the way you are developing the characters and the manner inwhich the plot is starting to unfold. Keep up the good work! 8-)
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 27, 2005
    ooooo i had no clue that you would add them, please can it be a R/E and a F/A ooooo i love those pairings. Either way keep up the good work and update A.S.A.P.
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  • From angelfoxsam on September 26, 2005
    itys good!! please pleas update soon!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on September 20, 2005
    I like this story!
    It's wonderfully written and detailed. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dana on September 18, 2005
    i'M really liking this so far, drags you into the story line, cant wait to read more =)
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  • From ANON - sanguinarysiren2106 on September 16, 2005
    Going well.
    I agree that if Roy and Ed moved too fast on each other then the story would sink down with a multitude of other short lived/loved fics in the depths of smutland (Not like I don't enjoy them however).
    But I can tell i'll be checking for updates regularly on this one, it's just so well written, in terms of minimal OOCness and good plot development.
    However, your not without your faults (no one is) no matter how small they are.
    You really should commit yourself to checking each chapter before you post it and I don't mean just running it through a spell check you need to read over each new part to make sure it makes sense.
    I came across a very amusing mistake that indicates quite obviously that your not giving this story the attention it needs to become almost perfect.
    "Mustang had raised his hand to silence Fullmental's questions until Al was finished"
    It's a cute mistake, just don't let them get anyworse than that.
    I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nubiti on September 15, 2005
    OMFG CUTENESS!! ed is back whieej.. en it was teh first world war btw. though I like it how you explained everything and yaaaoooi mustang puked *jukies* anyways keep up the goodwork (knows she's ranting)
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  • From ANON - sanguinarysiren2106 on September 14, 2005
    This is really well written...
    The first half chapters set a nice pace for the story line, although it gets a little slow later on, but it's all good.
    A skillful way to smooth out any OOCness (which is barely noticeable).
    I particularly enjoyed the argument Roy and Ed have in his dorm.
    You make a few miniscule spelling mistakes, a wrong letter here and there, but they're easily overlooked.
    On the whole well done.
    I look forward to seeing this story continued and am eagerly awaiting a sweet scene between roy and Ed.
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  • From ANON - ramona on September 14, 2005
    Ah, so short! Please, another chapter soon? By the way, happy anniversary of the day of your birth; may the angels dance and cherubim throw garlands for this joyous occasion. I hope that you share a great many more birthdays with good friends, loving family, and a pint of Neopolitan Ben & Jerry's.
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  • From ANON - animefreak92 on September 10, 2005
    Oh my god!
    Please update soon!
    This is a really good story, keep up the good work.
    Can't wait to see Al and their "date".
    Email me sometime.(look above)
    How many chapters is it going to have?
    What is the plot, or is it just a roy & ed love fic?

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  • From ANON - ramona on September 10, 2005
    I meant that you didn't have to give thanks for reviews; your posting more chapters is really thanks enough. As long as I can provide some oil to the creative machine...I understand what you said about multifaceted characters. I always start off with a story plot that seems so straightforward, and then one of my characters ends up pitching a fit or being killed off in a frustrated rage lol. No matter how much I want A to lead eventually to Z, I've learned that truly good characters will always change their destinies. I'm thankful that there are writers who know and respect that, instead of there just being people who plop a character in the middle of the ocean and expect them to swim to safety. Sometimes (unfortunately) they drown, sometimes they see if they can find a floatation device, sometimes they realize they belong there, but rarely do they every do what you want and JUST FREAKING SWIM. So we adapt, and they adapt, and we all end up better for it. Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on September 09, 2005
    The dairy farm report was cute. 8-) The way in which you've shown the optimism and maturity of Ed was very well done.
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  • From angelfoxsam on September 09, 2005
    first off *hugs* great fanfic n.n please update as soon as you can
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