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Reviews for The Phoenix and His Demons

By : DarkSongDesires
  • From ANON - Randy on September 09, 2005
    I liked it a lot-I think The story, Is well put together, And doesnt overstep any sort of Bounds when it comes to the whole "Mass Amount of Purple Prose" deal.Its Vauge enough to keep me reading, detailed enough for me to always know whats going on. Plus.
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 09, 2005
    hiya I couldnt review on FF.net because you enabled the no anonymouse reviews and I dont have an account there, so thought I would review here, first off, totally love your fic so far, have been reading since chap one but again have yet to review it me thinks, which is sad and I am sorry for that, anyhow the last chapter was great, I loved the way Ed just totally blew away all reasons why Roy should continue to suffer in quilt, and how Roy thought how having Ed back was a kick in the pants for all of them, he brings life back into an other wise dull sort of existance for them all, yes they might have the military and all, but Ed brings laughter and trouble and fun into thier lives, love the way he just showed up and took over while Roy slept and suprised the crap outta Riza and how she hugged him, and then Roy having heard a familiar voice but thought he was dreaming till he heard Riza talking and had to look and stood stunned in the doorway..that was totally priceless, and how the dull look left his eye and that old smirk and spark of life returned at the prospect of his duels with FullMetal, which he had missed for six long years, cant wait to see Al reaction and how he will cope with a brother he doesnt even know anymore, ooh please update soon, cant wait to read more, thank you for tha terrific read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Isirius on September 08, 2005
    ............. oh holy shit in a handbasket that was good....... I just love how despite the fact that you didn't really describe the sights and experiences from the war I could still see them in my head. I so want to read more of this story, It's just really great.

    And on a side note, your spelling and stuff is really good, it's just your punctuation that needs some work.

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 07, 2005
    man i am loving this. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Ramona on September 07, 2005
    Don't thank me for the review; I was glad to write it. No glaringly obvious mistakes in this chapter either, and thank you for being so prompt with it. It's nice to know that *some* people who ask so nicely for reviews read them and respond ^_^. I haven't seen every episode of FMA, or the movie, but from what I've seen, it would be so easy for Ed to become jaded or disillusioned by some of the things he's seen or had done to him. His unfailing optimism is kind of out of place, but that makes it interesting. Your fic keeps him true to character when you could go so far into left field...good job, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on September 07, 2005
    Your story is fun to read. Ed's plan of getting his forms and getting them "signed" were a good chuckle. 8-) I'm looking forward to reading more of your character's adventures...
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  • From ANON - Ramona on September 07, 2005
    I'm not usually a fan of Ed/Roy fics, but you hooked me with the 'alternate world-war' thing. I hope you update soon, because I can't wait to read more.On a technical note, your grammar and punctuation are very good, and this is the first time I can remember a really good story not being interrupted by by a mistake or tense change. I'm almost sad to say I read right through...please post more soon!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 06, 2005
    i am so loving this. please update soon
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  • From ANON - Shawver on September 06, 2005
    huzzah! poor Mustang thinks he's loosing his mind xP that was very cute, please continue! ^____^ (sneaky little Edo >< )

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2005
    omg i wan to know what happenes keep it up
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on September 02, 2005
    omg, what happens next, what happens next. c'mon tell meeeeeee. please update soon, your killing me here.
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  • From Lunacy on September 02, 2005
    Very interesting. Can’t wait to see what happens, please up-date soon!
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