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Reviews for The Phoenix and His Demons

By : DarkSongDesires
  • From radcat on July 05, 2007
    Good luck with the college classes (esp. math). Loved the beginning and would love to see where you go with this. Demons...interesting.
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  • From Invisabell on May 27, 2007
    I don't know if anyones told you this yet but the movie takes plack in the time in between WW1 and WWII.

    We know its after WWI becaus real world alphose mentions the treaty of Verseii. A treaty sighned in the after math of the first world war. Hitler isn't in power eiether yet, it's only after he seizes the govment that war breaks out again.

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    Anyways I like your story. the charaters are beleiveable and so's the Ed/roy romance.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2006
    Please keep going!
    P.S. You might want to consider moving this to the Yaoi section.
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  • From ANON - shatter the sky comes quietly on July 13, 2006
    Hey, this is pretty cool. Despite it being yaoi (nothing against it, I just can't SEE Roy/Ed pairings! ) you've kept them in character. Hope to see more of it soon.
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  • From ANON - Randomized-Data on July 09, 2006
    This is a really, well written/thought out FFict. Please keep going. I detest getting hooked on a particular FFict only for it to be canceled. But this particular one, is just... wow. Awaiting your next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on July 04, 2006
    After many false starts and AFF connection problems I finally was able to reread your story. It's great! To think sweet, innocent Al is the more feared Elric...Almost as feared as Hawkeye and her handguns...XD. I like how you went from kiss at the door to the next morning. It seemed to fit with Ed's infatuation (and long standing crush) on Roy. It felt right.

    I hope you do keep writing this story. 8-)


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  • From ANON - Kat on July 03, 2006
    Well, as I write this, I've only finished through chapter 5, but I must say that I'm really enjoying this so far. The only point I'd like to make at this point, (and someone else may have already said this, since I've yet to read the other reviews) is that in both the series and the movie, the events in our world take place in WWI and afterward, not WWII. I believe the series events take place in 1925, and I know for a fact the movie events take place in 1927, based on what is known today as the Beer Hall Putsch, where Hitler attempted a coup d' etat and failed on November 8, 1927. That's a good 10+ years before the events of WWII. It's not a criticism, since I totally understand your point about AUs, and if anything, you could say that Ed was dropped not only to another world, but another time. (Still.. I think the middle of the chapter might not have been the best place to make such a note ;) )

    .. Now back to reading, and I'll give a more complete review when I'm finsihed-- but I'm really enjoying what you've written so far.
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  • From ANON - Hi on June 10, 2006
    Hi, I just started reading this (new to the fandom) and I absolutly LOVE it! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 06, 2006
    Excellant story! 2 thumbs up! A lemon would be nice. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 06, 2006
    The first 3 chapters have me hooked. You have good solid writing skills. Entertaining story!
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  • From ANON - eternalruler on January 18, 2006
    YOu've got the characters TOTALLY down! this is by FAR my favorite fanfic. *applauds work* but for crying out loud, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! *must have fix @.@*
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on December 12, 2005
    Please write lots more of this!
    I love it its so wel written!
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  • From ANON - ai on December 08, 2005
    Sigh... I so cannot wait to find out what happens next, you have definately sucked me into the story, so bravo. Now get on with it!!!! MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - aisubeki on November 15, 2005
    Oooohhhhh!!!! More!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!
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  • From ANON - Famous1064 on November 14, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE! I just got into FMA and this is really good, well thought out. MAS MAS PORFAVOR MAS!
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