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Reviews for Persistence

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Tsami on December 26, 2005
    this was very, very good! thank you for yet another great chapter!

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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 26, 2005
    I'm glad things are reconciled to some degree.

    Kakarott must have naive to think Damaro would react any other way.

    I'm sure the king will hear of Kakarott's visit to Damaro, and put the pieces together.

    Great job! Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 26, 2005
    wow i can see why damaro mad
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  • From ANON - leaf on December 19, 2005
    You've finally got the repetition under control, mostly, there are still some parts that you repeat, but it isn't bad at all and where you DID repeat info, its artistic. GOOD TO GO! You get a gold star!
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  • From ANON - leaf on December 19, 2005
    you've writen a best seller here I think, if you were selling this, that is...anyways...this piece is wonderfuly inventive wonderfuly writen and if you don't keep up the good work, I swear I'll go insane!
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  • From ANON - Macha on December 16, 2005
    *BIG CHEESY GRIN* I have to LOVE instincts! LOL. If Kakarott had been thinking with his normal consiousness, I am not certain what the out come would have been. Something in him insisted to protect instead of flee. :D

    I wonder how he will set this whole mess to rest in his own head.

    Now I have to pout until the next update. *Very sad face* Excellent chapter.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 16, 2005
    wow i see kakarott finally relieze that vegeta is good
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 16, 2005
    Wow. Looks like Kakarott is seeing again.

    I wonder how king will react to thing now.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on December 16, 2005


    well well...*snerks*...practicing your cliffies are you? nice chapter, action, angst, and the plot thickens. good job!


    you still have a few little glitches with your english but because they are so few they're easy to skip over and not too distracting. are you getting this beta'd? I can't remember.



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  • From ANON - ChibiRinni on December 13, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I just started combing through this section and I luv ur story!! Please tell me that u'll put up the rest soon. I can't wait to see what happens!

    ~ChibiRinni ^.~
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on December 10, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - kikyo on December 08, 2005
    Aww!! Kakarott's finally warming up! ^-^ I'm so happy! Do I see a definite success for Prince Vegeta in the near future? I hope so. Still loving your story! Keep up with the great work that you do! ^-^
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  • From ANON - princekakarot on December 08, 2005
    i loved the story you should write more congrats you should get a medal lol see ya around
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on December 08, 2005

    Chapter 9


    I like how you described his reaction to the rain. And the sunny weather gives me the impression that events will change for the better... for the moment anyway.


    Keep up the great work.



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  • From ANON - Macha on December 08, 2005
    Hmm.... Vegeta sure wants things to go his way without having to force Kakarott into doing something the third-class doesn't want to do.

    Castle guards are so good for gossip.

    I am glad Verlio's relationship with Kakarott is making Kakarott healthier.


    Can't wait to see how this heat thing progresses.
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