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Reviews for Lonely Desire

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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on October 13, 2005
    So beautiful! This chapter is so beautiful! I love it!!!
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  • From ANON - rdavymac on October 08, 2005
    Update soon. I'm anxious to hear about Kira's pregnancy. Question: If they DO have sex, why will they 'drift apart' or whatever. To consumate they must have mad e some sort of confesion. I'm confused.
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  • From ANON - ivanblueangel on October 08, 2005
    well i've read a lot of ASUKIRA fanfic around the internet (yet still very little fic on them and are all mostly oneshot =.=||)....well i must compliment that this story is written in a very nice way ( not much of long series abt them), different from other authors.... its an excellent piece work!! Keep it up my fren!!! update soon for us XD

    i was hopping someone will touch on male preg in GS/ GSD series... i've read alot frm other anime (seriuosly a lot of mpreg) such as Gundam Wing, Weiss Kreuz, FF7...etc... i was wondering will there be anyone willing to writing it in GS/GSD timeline :lolx:

    And since this ASUKIRA fic which is my fav. pairing in the GS/GSD universe.... i am 200%-500% agreed on go go MPREG especially to my dear sweet kira :lolx: make him goes all the pain & torture he have to suffer during pregnancy, child birth and aftetmath.... WOW!!!!, i cant wait!!! >< thinking about makes me crazy :lolx: i've been waiting for this long for someone to touch on MPREG in this universe. mwahahahahaah!!!!!

    opps to long of crapping here... first time review a fanfic in a long long time =.=...i seldom review fanfic but i do read a lot of them especially ASUKIRA fic.... Keep it up!!! Update soon!!!

    ps: feel free to asked me opinions about Mpregs if u like to.... i'm no expert in it but i LOVE to read MPREGS FIC!!!! mwahahahaha!!!!!




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  • From ANON - pancake on October 08, 2005
    i'm really sorry, but i don't think i can continue reading this. the plot has just gotten too frazzled. the content of your chapters doesn't flow right, at least to my mind. something about the way Yzak is trying to get kira and athrun together is weird, like how he's doing something so dangerous just to get them together....its not quite right. if you were to write a different story all together, a dearka/yzak one perhaphs, i could read it, but this one has lost my interest. sorry. it ws a good read until here. keep up your work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ~Sango~ on October 07, 2005
    Wow~! Talk about hooking me in! Great chapter...really suspenseful. XD I hope they get together soon! Please update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on October 07, 2005
    I feel very bad for Arthrun. Really, I just hope that Kira sees what he has done soon.
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 07, 2005
    Yay! Another perfect chapter for the perfect story with the perfect plot! =P
    I feel so bad for Asuran... ;0; no one should suppose to handle all of that load. But at least he's doing it for Kira! ^^

    Whee!! Update soon and keep it up perfect fanfic writter!! YAY for chapter EIGHT!
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on October 06, 2005
    I will say that the male pregnancy is a good idea and a very original touch. I want to see this sotry updated.
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 06, 2005
    Hehe it was cool!! I liked it! ^^ Keep writting and update soon kk? =P

    about the male pregnancy thingie (again) --> Well, if you are going to include it, as long as it's Asuran and Kira's baby, then I guess it wouldn't be so bad.. even though I don't really like it much xD
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  • From ANON - Star on October 06, 2005
    wait your going to make kira pregenant.........thats seems interesting
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  • From ANON - Asukira chick on October 05, 2005
    YES! PREGNANT KIRA!! I so support the idea of male preg, why should women do all the hard work when it comes to children? I think that Kira should get pregnant with twins (hehe, like him and cagalli are)! Can athrun handle having twins running around the house? Id love to see him try *insert evil grin here*
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    okay, no offense, but the quality of this story is going waa~ay downhill. i mean, i totally laughed out loud and thought it was funny when you wanted to turn this into an Mpreg, cuz that'd be cool, but it's waaaaay off the story line, at least from what i can gather....i mean, if you turn it into an Mpreg, what's gonna happen to Ai, and who exactly is supposed to knock kira up? athrun? that'd defeat the plot, cuz the whole point is for athrun and kira to get together, right? or was this all planned from the beginning? if it was, then you didn't prepare us readers with the proper build up. i DID like the dearka/yzak chapter a lot, you wrote them VERY well, and should write more, but as for the rest of the story's strength...we'll see what you do.

    show me the magic!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 04, 2005
    ^^ I know.. it's just... Never mind =P I like it super much! It's awesomee!! ^^ Keep writting k? I want to see chapter 11! YAY

    male pregnancy? umm.. it's okay.. but I don't really like it that *much* ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    i love your story!! thanks for writing such a nice fic!!^^
    as for your 'survey'...
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! no mpreg!!!! if you want a pregnancy, kira might as well be a woman...
    well, that's my opinion, thanks for asking anyway
    update soon^^
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  • From ANON - YuehKitsune on October 04, 2005
    good fic so far. yo anwer your question on the pregnacy possible plot. I vote against it, its not that i don't like babies i just find pregnacy plots annoying and i try to avoid them. What you have right now is really good,my opinion, no pregnant people. no offence.

    Yueh Kitsune
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