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Reviews for A Brief Encounter

By : Harper
  • From apogee on September 05, 2007
    that was ridiculously awesome!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cheese goddess on December 28, 2005
    Wow, your fic was fantastic. I laughed all the way through. You hit all the cliches perfectly. I loved the bit where Vegeta started crying. Oh, and the part where he starts talking about measuring systems. It's so typical of (bad) b/v get-togethers that the *alien* speaks perfect English...er...Japanese, idioms and all. Basically, everything you wrote brought back all my years reading (bad) b/v fics... I'm so glad someone else noticed how repetitive and pointless they all are. The one cliche you omitted was that Bulma Is Heartbroken Because Yamacha Is A Bastard Who Nails Anything Female With A Heartbeat, but given the twist at the end of the fic that obviously wasn't possible.
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  • From ANON - Aelan on November 21, 2005
    Awww. I couldn't stop laughing through it, then I was like, aww, that had to be the sweetest ending. Totally OOC, but I don't care cause I was warned. It was so adorable.
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  • From ANON - disgruntled on November 19, 2005
    on a happier day i would praise this story for thinking outside of that stupid box,
    marvelling at your clever (altough) storyline,
    and laughing maniacly.

    BUT TODAY IS NOT THE DAY!

    i am not amused. can we say poorly written?

    #jokes!# mop up your grammer thous.

    If peeps dont like my comments dont hate. this is the disgruntled way.
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  • From ANON - Tain on October 20, 2005
    ya know for a minute there I thought it was really corny...then I read the end Good Show.
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