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Reviews for Model Behavior

By : mistryl
  • From ANON - studio on October 12, 2005
    *shudder* that last passage was written in a stunningly beautiful way... the type of way that makes it seem real enough to send a shiver down my spine, a good shiver though. I really hate when Kai is grumpy, *sigh*... I get the whole 'curse' thing being his motive or whatever, but is he going to become nicer at all later in the fic? *tummy flutter*
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  • From ANON - Shin Rigel on October 12, 2005
    Oh...dear. That was rather... awful of Kai ;_;!!!

    Way to destroy someone in five minutes, Kai!

    I like Brooklyns portrayal XD;
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on October 12, 2005
    chi no hana speaking! this is hot! mean, but hot! if there is this in every chapter, then i doubt i'll miss any!!! i love this!!!
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  • From ANON - Raven on October 01, 2005
    This story has amazing potential, I hope that you see fit to continue it, I look forward to seeing it unfurl. Beyound a few speling errors, the story flows nicely, and it certainly has caught my attention. I hope to read more soon. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Virpi on September 30, 2005
    NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! You can't leave that there, you just... CAN'T!!!!!! *sighes and calms down*
    Okay maybe you noticed: I fell in love with this fic when I first laid my eyes on it (and of course read it). So pleeeeeaaaaase, update really soon!!
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  • From ANON - Crystal Rose on September 30, 2005
    WOW! Loved it! Please write more KaixRei soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen when they meet! =)
    See ya soon, I hope! XD Bye!
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on September 30, 2005
    chapter 1 and we already see kai giving himself one!!! nice!!!
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  • From ANON - kiotana on September 29, 2005
    lol not bad^^ keep going plz
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  • From ANON - studio on September 29, 2005
    I like the way this starts off, with the silk and hair and all the twirliness.. I love figurative and descriptive writing... It's all so poetic. You manage to do what I have never achieved and that's introduce the plot or the outline of what's happening/happened in the first 500 words or so. I hate writing first chapters. Oooh... you aren't bashing Mao! I love people who don't make everything bad happen to one character, very unrealistic when that happens and in Beyblade they usually pinpoint Wyatt, Boris, Hillary or Mao. I hope you don't kill her, that'll make this like the first ever ReiXKai that hasn't got a brutally bashed Mao in it.

    Kai's last walk down the runway?? So he's quitting or something?? Ooh, found a typo. arroused instead of aroused, well, I'm guessing it's a typo because your spelling and grammar seems to be pretty much flawless, which I really love about you. I love good grammar, and I love writers who use it. I'm an OCD nutcase so bad grammar tends to make me flip a little.

    nazy hair? Another typo. Gah. Typos are annoying, aren't they?

    So are Max and Takao going to get on well with Rei, despite the gypsy thing? I hope so, I even have that whole 'hunch' thing going on.

    Hehe... I'm guessing that Kai is somewhere in the middle of room 573 right about now??

    Good job, you write very well, and I wouldn't worry about this being compared to Innocent Dance - much too different. I'm wondering if you have a BETA, because the lack of mistakes and the neat style of writing you have is really rare in un-Beta'd fanfics.

    ~studio
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  • From ANON - Shini ^o^! on September 29, 2005
    Oooh! How wonderful!! That scene with Kai was absolutely delicious!!
    X9!

    I can't wait for more. I love Kai's attitude and the sezzy image of Rei dancing *o*!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on September 29, 2005
    Lol. Let me guess. He gets stuck with the stuck up jerk Kai. Why did Tyson and Max look at him like that? Hope they get over it. Love this story and how you've put Ray. He fits a dancer's personality. Update soon.
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