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By : dbzgotentogt
  • From TracyGirard on April 05, 2011
    Are you 10? Do you even know what punctuation and spelling is? This website is for adults which obviously your not.
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  • From ANON - Kenshintrutan on November 03, 2005
    Grammer Rating F-----
    Originality in Title F---
    Next time you want to steal a title it better not fuckin be MINE!!!
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  • From ANON - Little Bitch on October 05, 2005
    O_O You have another story here?? If anyone can call them that! Dear god...please, please, PLEASE if you want to be taken seriously as a writter, work on grammer, proper spelling and sentance structure! For the love of CHEESE!! Do it and do it now. GO!!!
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  • From ANON - lordofthepies on October 04, 2005
    Firstly, you should get a word processor to deal with the glaring grammar/ spelling errors in this. (And don't give me the bull about MS word not being avaliable. There are alternate solutions, like free word processors to download, or websites to check your English.)

    You should be using capital letters at the beginning of sentences/names- the shift key is your friend. You should also try either breaking up your sentences and making them more coherrent- it reads like the incoherrent ramblings of a crack addict. "And" should only be used once in a sentence. Also, you should use speech quotation- there is none here.

    There are other problems- tenses, punctuation and plot being among them, but it appears you have just sat down and written this without a thought- probably hitting the keyboard with your bloody stumps you have for arms- so I honestly don't think I should waste that much time.
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  • From ANON - The Chichi Slaughter House on October 04, 2005
    Oh look...more shit from you...

    I suggest you look at your other "fic" and take my criticisms into account. Learn how to write.
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