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Reviews for Passport to Paradise

By : gokugirl
  • From ANON - Macha on November 15, 2005
    *poke* Is there going to be any more of this any time soon?
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  • From ANON - dazz_teddybear on October 25, 2005
    Hey there!!!

    This story is so good I like every detail you have put in there. The way Vegeta and Goku met and the rest of the story is very interesting.

    Please update soon, this is great!!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 17, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on October 17, 2005
    Hmm... curiouser... and... curiouser...fascinating...indeed!

    this is intriguing. can't wait to see how it ends.

    [for the record: i enjoy your style. it not only speaks of a mature writer, but a mature reader-aka someone with life experience-can really appreciate the subtleties. things happen quickly in real life, and that is the pace you set. it's a wild roller coaster ride...it's fun, and I like it! ^_~ !
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 17, 2005
    Ooh!! Cool chapter.

    I hope Kakarotto makes it home in time.
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 16, 2005
    YAY, another set of 5 great chapters. It is still very interesting, and your plot twists have made it even more so! Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more of this soon.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 16, 2005
    wow drama
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 16, 2005
    This story is awesome. You've done a great job with it so far. The lemons were nice, but the plot is what kept me reading.

    I can't wait until you update. :)
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on October 16, 2005
    Very interesting...and a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the story! After the day I had, this was just what I needed. Thanks! Thank you very much.
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  • From ANON - leaf on October 15, 2005
    There are VERY few stories with the flavor this one has. Thank you very much for writing it. However, there are a few things I've noticed, things happen a little too fast. Its great if it is a short story, sure...but if it is to be long, like this one appears to be. things should slow down, put more detail in between. This story is very reminiscent of the ‘Sword of Truth’ series, or the ‘Wheel of Time’ book series, and the authors tend to jump around a little in those books but not as much as you seem to. To put it simply, the plot shouldn't be so blatant and there should be more of it. Your story is a bit shallow, even if the language is brilliant. Not that I'm talking down to you. You’ve obviously got skill. So keep up the good work! And watch out for those typos and spelling errors!
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  • From ANON - Webteter01 on October 15, 2005
    Fascinating. I like adventure stories. :D
    I look forward to the rest.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 15, 2005
    great chapters
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