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Reviews for Of Sex and Saiyans: Part Two

By : Hellagoddess
  • From ANON - makuba on November 23, 2005
    i love this story ... i wish the chapter was longer, but i still love it anyway
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 22, 2005
    *eyes cookies and documents dubiously* Um... you can keep those.

    Any way, *SOBS* No Mir, come back! He didn't even stick around to get a possible ass chewing. *sighs* Go get him Gohan!


    I am going to hold you to your promise. I hope those crossed fingers were for good luck.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 22, 2005
    YES! YES! YES! You have updated and a fantastic chapter at that. Oh I hope Gohan goes after M.Trunks. This made my day (after having a truley sucky day at that) I was so excited to read and see what happened next. PLEASE keep writing! This is a great story and you'll have me reading it until you decide its complete! Thanks again for making my day and have a great Thanksgiving...and (again) PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - krya on November 22, 2005
    there is a distinct lack of kissing, dammit. did you do this on purpose? XD

    *finds satisfaction that "the conversation" is going to happen soon*
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  • From ANON - Galacia and Demons on November 10, 2005
    I know what that is like I don't think I've finished any of mine that is why I don't really post any of mine. Because I lose track where I am. I have to my credit finished a one shot that I am pretty proud of. But that is about it. Just promise to continue!
    Poor Mirai, poor Gohan. I liked the first one and hope they get back together soon. Awww.... Mirai wants to be a "mom" that is so cute! Sorry side thought there. I hope they get back together, preferably before Mirai makes plans to kill Chibi Trunks AND excute them. Because then poor Goten would be sad.

    Jynx: Sad chibis? NO SAD CHIBIS!!!! Poor Mirai! YOU BE NICER TO MY MIRAI NOW!!!!!

    Galacia: Hex, uhm could you?

    (Hex leads his distraught twin to a room where... well we don't need to discuss what Jynx sees there but it cheers her up a lot.)

    Hex: That should take care of that. Sheesh we have got to do something with her Mirai addiction.

    Galacia: Addiction. Good word at least she doesn't want him as her sex slave. Like Nutsy wants Vegeta to be.
    (Shakes head to block out any disturbing thoughts of Nutsy doing heaven knows what to the poor saiyan prince.)

    Well we love part one and are looking forward to more of part 2!
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  • From ANON - leaf on November 10, 2005
    That's bad...doing that to Trunks! I know Gohan misses his koi too, but damned....all these miserable things happening between them, all their missunderstandings....how will they ever get back together?
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  • From ANON - saffron on November 07, 2005
    good but why you picking on poor trunks he is so sensitive

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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 07, 2005
    I love it!! The scene with Goku and Vegeta was sooooo cute:) More don't stop writing! I want to see what type of baby Vegeta has! Do Gohan and Miria get back together? I hope so. Don't stop, keep writing!!!PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 07, 2005
    Poor Mirai... he has no place in the current situations going on around him. *sighs sadly* I hope things work out soon.
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  • From ANON - Krya on November 07, 2005
    both of them are being assholes. i'd like to knock them BOTH one. particularly gohan. -_-

    but... what's this about goten seeing them together? *sing song voice* i smell debauchery! >=D
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 23, 2005
    Oh, I feel so bad for Gohan, but in a way I don't also. He was the one who sent Miria away in the first place. I just wish he knew how to get into contact with Miria, before either of them goes to far and feels that they can't return.

    Ah, that was awfully sweet between Goku and Vegeta. Of course, I don't know why Vegeta would think anything else would have come from Goku. *scratches head*
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on October 22, 2005
    That was an awsome chapter. That part with Vegeta and Goku was so cute! I can't wait to see Goku deal with the mood swings of a pregnant Vegeta (sinckers)! And you can't help but fell sorry for Gohan I hope they get back together. Please don't stop writing, keep going!! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - leaf on October 22, 2005
    Sorry to say, but I think I can out do you in the sap department *GRINS* Wonderful chapter as always, again, wonderful new title! And email me leave_leaf_alone@yahoo.com if you wanna read my fics, I'll be all too happy to send them your way...working on the next chapter, but it is going to take me a while...~_~ Most of the time i'm tired and too sore to work on it after my regular duties and shit. Oh, and if there are any words you can't read in this, its cause I can't see to fix my typos...too lazy to get off my ass and put my glasses back on! (Sorata afraid to have anyone beta my work, I don't like the idea of anyone changing what I've writen even if some of it is gramaticaly wrong and mispelled...its still well put together and some of the lines I type out are amazing! If I do say so myself!)
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  • From ANON - leaf on October 21, 2005
    VERY good tittle! Two thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - leaf on October 20, 2005
    how about you call it, The Triles of Parenthood...or something like that...I'm not sure what your story is going to be about, but you've gotta realize that a good title matches the story.
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