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Reviews for Second Chance

By : pepper01
  • From ANON - kittycat on August 15, 2006
    Oh My Gosh! OH MY GOSH! That was THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!! Please up date as soon as possible!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarong Luv on February 03, 2006
    Dear Author,

    Lke the story I hope you make more soon. Maybe something funny, weird making Duo a smart on Heero if he catches him like if they travel together Duo know a lot of things in places he'd been too or things that had happen to him or somthing. Sorry (nervous laugh) I really love stories especially other peoples stories (small laughs).
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  • From HauntedNightmares on January 28, 2006
    hair pins in the hands of a lock picker tend to be handy should they need to escape.
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  • From HauntedNightmares on January 28, 2006
    that's so sad. *sniff sniff* i'm almost to tears.
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on January 26, 2006
    Please updaaaattteeeeee.....I need to know what will become of those two.....
    Please please update soon....and by the way I love where your story is
    heading but please update as soon as you can...
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on January 26, 2006
    Please update soon...I wanna know what Heero will do with Duo when he catches him
    getting out of his room...or something horrible you know??...really so please make new
    chappies I will wait until you make new ones...better then this one....Update soon
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  • From ANON - Aidan eiram on November 13, 2005
    Ok, I do have bad grammer, what I meant, was that I hope this didn't die half way.
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  • From ANON - Aidan eiram on November 13, 2005
    OOOOoooo!!! I'd like to read more and I'm hope that this did end half way. So please write more, thank you!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 08, 2005
    This is a good story so far. Could you please put me on your story update email list thing? I would really appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Alexokerry on November 08, 2005
    This is an interesting premise. There are quite a few problems with spelling and grammar that distract from the storyline. May I suggest looking into getting a beta to help with these? You've got the talent, all you need is someone that can help you find the weak spots and straighten things out. Hope to see more from you.
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  • From ANON - Bite16 on November 06, 2005
    Love It. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - jakejs on November 03, 2005
    You seriously need to spell-check and read-over your chapters . BEFORE you post them . The story line is great , but your killing it . Also , draw a line or something between different POV"s , the story will be less confusing then .
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2005
    Good story concept, but try to work on keeping the story in the same tense. If you can find someone to beta read it, that'd really help.
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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on October 28, 2005
    wow that was fast lol.....can ya do that again ? ..guess i'll keep you

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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on October 27, 2005
    what's in the bundle? huh? update soon ..
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