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Reviews for The forbidden; Series

By : CrazyJen
  • From ANON - pinak on November 14, 2005
    hey buddy u kow what your stories are getting cooler and u r getting irreguler. update both mysteriouse and this one..... GET IT??!!
    or do i have to come to kill u for making your readers waiting too much??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2005
    Scary! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - SpiritualEnergy on November 11, 2005
    Wow that was a close call for them! Whats the disguise? Anyways awesome chap PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Kali on November 09, 2005
    Waaaaiii!!! Upadate! *tackleglomps Jen* You rock! Man, I have to tell you the tension in this is fabulous between Kai and Tyson! *growls* I just wanna strangle Voltaire though. >_< Keep up the fantastic work, Jen!!!!!!

    Kali
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    Thank goodness, Kai was there to save Takao. But, what kind of disguise is Kai talking about? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on November 09, 2005
    Man this is cool. Hope Tyson gets away from that asshole. Hope Voltaire rots in hell for what he did to Tyson's family. Will his Dad, Ray and the Demo. boys be in this story? Will Max and Kenny catch up with Tyson? Glad he doesn't hate Maxie. Update soon please. Can't wait to see more. By the way what does Arai mean?
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  • From ANON - lo on November 09, 2005
    Is english not your first language?? There are a few missplaced and missed used words. Example: use the word 'captured' and not 'captivated'
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  • From ANON - phoenixandashes... I know, lazy me. on November 09, 2005
    Wahey! Damn it Kai! Kiss him alreasy! *kicks Kai*

    Kai: Hey! Keep him alive would be good.

    >.< But I want kissing!

    Kai: You are really weird.

    I know! Nice work, KTS! ^_^ Oh... what's your username on dA? The link on your profile don't work -.-"

    Keep up the good work, love phoenixandashes
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  • From ANON - Virpi on November 09, 2005
    OMG! You are so good at this, I'm totally hooked! Please update a.s.a.p.!
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  • From ANON - Virpi on November 04, 2005
    Yay this is SO good! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - pinak on November 04, 2005
    HI!! your story is great. i only rreaad the prologe and the first chapter.. and i guess it would be tough to sleep tonight without finishing it. so update quick. it is GREAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Kali on November 03, 2005
    O_O Okay...how long has this been sitting on your comp, Jen!? LOL 'Cause it's fantastic!!!! Totally awesome and original idea you've got going for the plot, too (but then your plots are always wicked!). I was sniffling after the first chapter...and I wanted to hug poor Tyson by the end of the third. !!__!! Pook kid. Lucky for him "Phoenix" came along and saved his butt, huh? ~_^ Keep up the fantastic work on this, Jen! Definately a gem of a fic here!

    Kali
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  • From ANON - Minako on November 02, 2005
    wow i love your story!! plz update!! hey when is Takao gonna find out Pheonix's real name? lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    That was awesome!! Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on November 02, 2005
    Ah man. Glad Ty's safe. Hope Max and Kenny do set out to find him and succeed. That asshole Voltaire needs to go down harsh and fast. Boris too I hope. Looking forward to an update. Soon please?
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