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Reviews for Merry-Go-Round

By : krya
  • From ANON - Jinx on September 09, 2015
    Yo! I love this fic! You have a great since of humor and your characters are compelling. I really hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - lyn on September 16, 2012
    I Looooooove where this is going the characterization is awesome!! Please continue!!
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  • From IuvenesL on July 25, 2009
    This was actually a good little fic - hate to see you being so hard on yourself. So, I agree with anon about the AC grate, but other than that...not bad at all. ;)
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  • From ANON - JenaVeta on November 15, 2005
    Well can't say much. So far so good. Remember details. um I hope u right more. Can't wait to read the yaoiy parts. well um um kind of am out of it so good luck and lost of lemony yaoi kisses. Keep safe.
    Jen
    *P*L*H*
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  • From ANON - Sarah on November 15, 2005
    Hey!

    I like it. It's funny. Dominant Goku is entertaining.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on November 08, 2005
    Where the hell's the rest of it?! Y'can't just stop there! Well, the change in Goku's personality is truly intriguing. Why did it happen? XD I can just imagine the chase! It's awesome! Wonderful job, for writing it in a day.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 07, 2005
    I think this is a good beggining. I would love to see Goku catch Vegeta ;) Keep writing!

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  • From ANON - lordofthepies on November 07, 2005
    Not a bad read at all, actually, albeit a little short. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more of it, since your writing style is very readable, despite being unbeta'd (I didn't see much in the way of errors). It is always nice to see Goku acting up. I liked reading Vegeta running away, that brought a smile to my face. It is futile, my little Prince. Anyway, I hope you will write more, this is a solid start.
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  • From ANON - saffron on November 07, 2005
    very good but where is the rest ?
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 07, 2005
    AWESOME!! I love it!

    "You have a really nice ass."
    Vegeta lost his temper. He turned and threw a jar of mayonnaise at the offender. "Are you deaf? I told you to go home!"

    This just absolutely cracked me up! I was drinking at the time and spurted my drink all over my keyboard! But it was worth it! So funny! *wipes eyes* i like the kinda in charcter Vegeta...and when Goku said he wanted him and Vegeta said Tough shit...i was like...'that's so Vegeta!' lmao

    Please update! I wanna see what happens! I love the scary stalky Goku too! lmao

    Hellagoddess

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  • From ANON - anon on November 07, 2005
    Okay, it's a PWP, with tails. We're all good with that. Goku's libido went supersaiyajin. Fine with that.

    But why would Vegeta, of all people, be unable to open a ventilation shaft grate?
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