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Reviews for Negating Need

By : trowacko
  • From ANON - arora_kayd on January 09, 2006
    Omg. The Angst. It's so pretty ^.^ That was loverly.

    i do belive Maes/Roy is becoming my new crack.

    Thanks muchly for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Green Bird on November 14, 2005
    That hurt so bad it was brilliant. You are an ace. Completely.
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  • From ANON - mmmslash on November 12, 2005
    I really enjoyed this! You have an excellent, descriptive writing style and your portrayal of their relationship and of Roy as a broken man is incredibly effective. My one offer of constructive criticism concerns Roy's drinking.

    Now, feel free to ignore this if you feel I am being paranoid, but it seems to me that a lot of the fandom seems to think Roy is an alcoholic because we see him drinking a few times in the series and we see the horrific things that have happened in his past. Fair enough. Write it that way if you want. But I don't think anything in canon suggests that it is true. So, my only offer for concrit (and if this is what I'm picking on, you've done an *excellent* job): You may want to be a bit more clear on whether this has been going on since Ishbal, since Gracia, or more recently. Roy is ambitious and has risen high in the ranks. I don't see that happening if he is falling down drunk all the time.

    That said, this was gorgeous and I love it and I look forward to more from you. *hugs*
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