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Reviews for Time Fault and Out

By : Deb
  • From ANON - Dhampir on October 20, 2006
    Well, reading all 50 chapters in two days does speak for itself about your story and writing. I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter and learned quite a lot as well, which I have never objected. The way you portray the characters is elegant and fiery all in one (if that makes any sense). I'm personally glad that Relena wasn't portrayed as she usually is--a hopeless case that's in love with Heero and just shrieks her love for him to the world. It's nice to see her, deranged and delusional than clinically insane and incurable. I think this obsession view fits her much better than the unrequited love view.

    There are a couple things I have questions on though, first off, what exactly is the 'humane killer'? A rifle or something? Second, would be the time line. To my understanding, Heero was in a cast for six-eight weeks, which left one week before he went to the camp. Hopefully I'm right so far. He had his cast removed and rode Zero with minimal pain as well as went swimming the next day or within the next few days. Yet, the muscles should've been atrophied slightly from the cast and thus, riding would've damnwell hurt! Let alone diving into the swimming pool.

    I know from my experience--joint removal--that surguries like that are usually a long process, or so it was to my understanding. That's why I'm asking about the time in this story. I'm not certain I have it right because then it feels too rushed. Having a metal plate and pin inserted into the humerus bone isn't exactly minor surgury. Hell, my surgury happened six months ago and I am now just being allowed to lift over fifteen pounds and type.

    So, not to bash that or anything, I'm just curious because I'm a bit confused on that part.

    Anyway, you don't have to answer any of this, I'm just writing out my questions and such. Other than that, you are a superb writer and I'm looking forward to the next chapter anxiously. Thank you for becoming such a wonderful authress.

    --Dhampir
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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on September 13, 2006
    Hey!!!!! You know I love your stories, hope nothing bad happens, for the National Cup, but knowing your stories you always have a twist :D can't wait for the next update, can't wait..keep up the good work...hugs
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  • From ANON - orikoyume87 on August 10, 2006
    Awesome work. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your writing. I have enjoyed your other stories, as well, mostly notably the Heero/Duo pairings. These two (this and its prequel) are especially good as you are very knowledgeable on your subject. I love the way that you are so descriptive about things,it makes the reading very pleasurable. I am so looking forward to the next update, can't wait to see what kind of twists you will have for us next. I think that is what I also enjoy, the fact that you keep us guessing as to what will happen next, it's not just the same old stuff, rewritten, again. And the characters and the situations are so very believable, they are very three dimensional. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on July 26, 2006
    ...Oh ouch. Poor Zechs! That's so horrible... *hugs Zechs* Well, he's got Treize to look after him now, so he'll be okay. *grin* Hopefully Relena will accept Zechs and *finally* let go of this bloody blind obsession with Heero. I really feel sorry for that boy... that girl is scary when she's like that. x.x;;;
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  • From ANON - SkyLark on July 21, 2006
    MEW LoVED the chappie !! lotsa fun relena bashing nd stuffs nd go heero nd the others as well cause it really dose take a lota ciurage to do stuff like that mew ne ways do da do I'm glad piecemillion is ok cause he's a cute pony yes yes I know he's a horse but to me they are all ponys Kudos for an awsome chappie and even more so for a seriously awsome fic all together thia one nd equinity are my absolute fave fics in the world! ne way i gtg so till next review

    Ja-ne

    ~ Cat ~
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  • From ANON - SkyLatk on July 12, 2006
    omg loved the chappie lets celabrate a successfull opperation by killing relena!! ne way I loves the chappie nd stuffs woot nd kudos

    till next review

    Ja-ne

    ~ Cat ~
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  • From ANON - SkyLark on July 09, 2006
    love the chappie poot piecemillon i hope he's gonna be ok though relina needs to die nd such but um ya ne way love the fic please update soon arigato

    ja-ne

    Skylark

    ~ Cat ~
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  • From ANON - Remon on July 03, 2006
    Oh no! Poor Peacemillion! I hope everything goes ok with him... Although I wonder how it would effect the parasite...? Anyway..*cough* Liked the chapter and can't wait to find out how the court hearing goes. I'm cheering for Duo with everything I've got! ^,^
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  • From Zoshia on June 23, 2006
    YES!!! Oh man. I am so addicted to this story I can't even tell you! And thank god Relena is going down! I was waiting (literally) on the edge of my seat for that to happen! Hope you update soon, I'm loving this story. *sigh* Duo and Heero... That's true love. ^,^ Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - SkyLark on June 19, 2006
    omg loved the chapie! do u like voltaire?? just asking cause you had a line ( " Hell Hath no fury like duo maxwell scorned" ) that is similar to one in his song Vampire club well it's late so till next review Ja-ne nd good night

    ~ Cat ~


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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on June 17, 2006
    This story is wonderful. I can't wait til they go to court .wheeeeeeee that's going to be one hell of a cat fight. great job update soon :D hugs
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  • From ANON - Skylark on June 14, 2006
    awsome chappie love the fic please up date soon

    ~ Cat ~

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  • From ANON - SkyLark on June 11, 2006
    AWSOME CHAPPIE please update soon must find out what happens next ^_^ till next review ja-ne

    ~ Cat ~
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  • From ANON - tyleet88 on June 06, 2006
    Love the story, well love all your stories :D..well seems like Relena needs her head examined her elevator doesn't go all the way up. Update soon plz :D
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  • From ANON - Smilie on June 03, 2006
    Love your story always waiting for more updates
    glad to hear that you liked Brokeback Mountain i grew up in the town that it was filmed in and it was cool to know the sites when watching the movie
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