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Reviews for The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher

By : Skydark1

From ANON - ohitsjordann on May 20, 2013
This was just perfect! It's everything I love in a good fanfic and more. Just the right amount of sex, humour, angst, and cute rolled up into one perfect little bundle of joy. The end was priceless! Gods. I love Edward Elric. xD
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From LostinThought8 on November 08, 2010
I have read many a Roy/Ed Fic, but yours is and will always be my favorite. It's just...perfection. The characters, the plot, the sex, the romance, everything. Nothing can even compare to this wonderful, beautiful, absolutely AMAZING piece of fanfiction.

I think you must be some sort of goddess. Might I follow you around for a bit, in a non-stalkerish fashion? I love you. ^^

If I could write even half this well, I should be pleased. Don't EVER stop writing Roy/Ed, or I shall cry.

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From dewdrops on May 09, 2009
This was AWESOME. I kid you not, you have truly created a master-piece here. You are ~hilarious~ -and you've managed to write a deliciously smutty story while maintaining characters and a semblance of plot!-My GOD it's so cute! There were so many adorable interactions and it wasn't just a jerk of fic-I loved it! You had depth and the other characters were utilized and not just used as back-drops for the main sexin'-it-up, It's such a fun read, honestly. I heard about it from a friend and now I just finished it all in one sitting and I am contented.

And your writing style,-lovely. Honestly, your humor comes through in your writing and the way you mold words, it's art. God, you're a funny one and some of those situations-I just had to laugh out-loud, alone in my room-that's when you know it's funny.

Excellent. And I took a quick peak at your profile and it appears that you've written more for Ed/Roy and I , may just have to pop over and see. Expect to hear a new review sometime in the future-you're a good writer-stick with it, you got a LOT of talent.

See you soon!

-DD
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From Irana on August 28, 2008
�Can I meet him?� Anna asked and Roy blinked in surprise. Eeeee! I;'m so happy about that. I was hoping they'd make up and I kept thinking that if she just met him, she'd see, she'd understand. And damn, I'm not going to be able to finish this til next week, because I'm going away for the holiday and will have no internet. *pouts*
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From Irana on August 27, 2008
OMFG!!! How did you do this? You have me positively loving this story and I normally hate fic with characters under 16 having sex with adults! You actually have me rooting for them, and damn near crying when Roy's friend walked out on him and gah! How the hell did you do this to me? I knew Ed totally had Roy in the first chapter and ... wow. Just wow. Okay, just finished chapter 7 obviously, on to the rest.
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From ramtopswitch on April 20, 2008
Your stories are ridiculously amazing. I just re-read the first chapters of this after finishing the sequel. I read this story yesterday. I love how you deal with the issues without dwelling too much on them. Especially when Roy is desperately sending psychic messages to Ed so that Ed will hit him like he's supposed to and doesn't Ed know his role? And you made me even like the bad sex. I usually dislike (even though I admire the aim) realistic sex. Fanfic is an escape for me and it breaks the fantasy, but damn you made bad sex hot. And you made me still like the story when they were in a relationship and having relationship issues. Another realistic thing I usually hate.
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From AmethystEyedKoneko on August 13, 2007
Hi! I know this story has been completed for some time now but I only just now read it. I started to read your newest fic, "True Story", but since it is a sequel of a sequel I had to start at the beginning. Which brings us to this review. I absolutely loved this story!!! There were so many wonderful things in this story I can't begin to list them all! There were times when I laughed so hard I almost hurt myself! The part where everyone thought Roy had VD (hadn't heard it called that in a while!) was hysterical!! Ed's reaction had me on the floor!! XD OH! When Ed left Roy tied to the headboard because Al had got flattened by a truck (I cracked up over that one too!) was great!! I liked to died laughing when Ed finally came back and released Roy and a very naked Roy (woohoo!) chased Ed out of the house and somehow Ed left boot prints up the wall!! ROFLMAO!! priceless!! OH!! One thing you positively deserve a damn award for was managing to put Paul Simon song lyrics in an FMA fanfic!! "You could be my long lost pal, I could call you Benny." "You can call me Al." Friggin' genius!! I was like, "No way! Lyrics from that old song here?!? WOW!!". sheer brilliance!! I don't know if anyone else mentioned it before but I was impressed! :D Another funny moment was when Roy tried to have actual sex with Ed and Ed kept scooching away from him. Ed said something about pointing him towards the headboard so he couldn't get away and I died laughing at that! I absolutely love the way you've written Ed!! Roy is excellent too! :) Another of their failed attempts at sex that was awesome was when Roy had an angel and a devil on his shoulder arguing over Roy just taking Ed. The devil's comment, "Show him how the Mustang mounts his mare", was the best! :D When Roy and Ed finally did have sex in that hayloft it could not have been written any better. It was especially touching that in the midst of all hell breaking loose around them, Roy and Ed found this one perfect moment to be together and become one like they never had before. The agony Roy went thru while Ed was gone, being haunted by Ed's 'ghost', broke my heart and I cried for him, for them. I sobbed like a baby when Ed finally came home! :) A very much bedraggled and hesitant Ed stumbling out of the shadows to meet a totally overwhelmed and scared to believe it was true Roy had me on the edge of my seat! sad tears, happy tears, tears everywhere! XD Young Al was adorable when he called Roy a pirate! loved it! This was and is a great story that I will read again and again! I wish there was some way to recommend it to others because I think it's so good that everyone should read it! I've already read the next part, "Better Living Through Alchemy", because I HAD to know what happened next and will have a review up for it soon!
Thanks for a fantastic read! :D
Koneko =^.^=
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From tutyfrty on July 19, 2007
Oh, Man this is exquisitely written. The lessons of Edward at the hands of Mustang are wonderful. The relationship between the two is so tender and sweet. I love it. Great story so far.
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From ANON - acr on December 19, 2006
good story! I love this fic. You did an excellent job of working the relationship into the 'cracks' of the canon storyline, so they lined up perfectly and it all worked.
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From ANON - acr on December 12, 2006
Great fic! Though, I kinda feel like Al's genius is stealing Ed's thunder a little...what's Ed's niche, alchemy-wise?
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From ANON - tash1021 on November 27, 2006
i think my heart stop while i was readding
this is great am gald here a part to:)

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From ANON - shinimegami23 on October 19, 2006
I know I have probably reviewed this story before. But I just re-read it, and it is one of the most amazing pieces of fiction I have read, and ties for the best piece of fanfiction (of any genre) that I have read. The othe one was a lord of the rings, and therefore apples and oranges, so you have the best anime fanfiction I have ever read, and I am a huge fan of gundam wing, and we all know how many of those fanfictions are out there. I must congratulate you, i feel i was along with Roy and Ed on their emotional rollercoaster, not many stories do that. I wish that they could give you an award for this story because you deserve it!
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From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 10, 2006
I can already tell this is going to be fun.

I love the wordplay of the title, "Sex ED teacher". Hehehe.
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From ANON - TreeStar on September 22, 2006
This is SOOOO cute. it's so real. THIS is what a real good first time is like. not like how all the other authors have it written. The insecurity and the fear and hesitancy and the SHYNESS that Ed exibits is how it really is for a fifteen year old who doesn't know what they're getting into exactly, when they are with someone who wants to give and not take, and teach them. I felt like i was reading about my own first time with the emotions and the slowness that you used, and that's really saying something. Except that i'm a girl... but still, a nieve fifteen year old who doesn't even know exactly what sex really entails is what you described so well, i was amazed. this is fantastic! and all in one chapter? Kudos to you! I can tell you spent a lot of time getting this right. i didn't find any mistakes at all. GREAT JOB! You're a stunning author!
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From ANON - Shisho Kat on September 13, 2006
Fantastic story- wonderful writing- can't stop reading!
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