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Reviews for The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2005
    *sobs* Now I can't finish this story or it will spoil the show. I mean I know sort of what happens but still. DARN YOU! Why did you have to be such a skilled writer? maybe next story just endless roy/ed smutt that doesnt follow the story line?
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  • From ANON - Lady gray on November 29, 2005
    wow, no kidding, one of the best fanfic's i have every read, hands down. the last two chapters are just perfect, pain happiness, all of it. And OMG Roy's speech when ed ask's if he missed him, it nearly made me cry! if your done with this fic i want to say i will be looking out for your next one because I am offically a fan!!
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  • From ANON - the smiley bandit on November 28, 2005
    That was a truly evil place to stop.
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  • From Fate on November 28, 2005
    *screams* EGH! How can you just leave it there! *Screams again* What happened to this nice little story that made me giggle. It made me cry. Wow your mean! *cries again* Poor poor Roy...*hugs him* I want another chapater. No i NEED another one..Your so friggin mean! If you wheren't suchy a wonderful author i'd strangle you!
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  • From ANON - GlitterGirl on November 28, 2005
    Very, very good story! I love the humor and the interplay between Ed and Roy... It's a joy to read the bits where they're feeling around each other's foibles and idiosyncracies, and coming to terms with them... Oh, and the romance is hot, too. *grin* I only have one quibble, and it's mainly with the latest chapters. You tend to start off in the past tense and then suddenly jump into present. Ex: Roy watched Edward as he danced. The boy sees him and beckons.

    Now, this is a crappy example I made up, but you get the point, neh? :) It jars the whole narrative. Still, it's easily fixed, and the editing will make a fabulous story even more fabulous!
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 28, 2005
    Ahh!! I am anxious with anticipation. o_____o Update please!

    You know, I was re-reading the previous chapter last night (how sad am i? LOL!) and really, I don't believe in love... but such a strange feeling when Roy said he loved Ed, I was SO moved, I can't even explain why, it was just beautiful. I loooove you!
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  • From ANON - Werwolfie on November 28, 2005
    Hey, are there any spoilers that we should look out for?
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  • From ANON - Aqua-san (again) on November 28, 2005
    Hello again, I just wanted to say that don't mind the idiotic D/H who posted on 2005-11-26. Yeh, he just doesn't appricate a good story but don't worry everyone else does. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Aqua-san on November 28, 2005
    Saw it at your livejournal, saw it again at the LJ Communtiy: FAM Yaoi, saw it everywhere and also here! I love you, your icons and most of all, your wonderfully evil-yet-so-good yaoi fics.

    I absolutly positivly love you.


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  • From ANON - PhoenixElentari on November 28, 2005
    I love you and this story!
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  • From ANON - the smiley bandit on November 27, 2005
    okay review number two after reading some other reviews:

    Personally I love they way you have drawn out the relationship and that you did not have them just jump in and go for it like rabbits. Anyone can write that. What is difficult to write is a story that captivates its readers and leaves them wanting more. Sweet love stories are seriously lacking in the fanfic world and I must say I have been waiting for this kind of story, that I didn't have to write myself ^_^. Not that I have ever let anyone read any of them, ofcourse, and they are sooooooo not near this good. So while we are all entitled to our opinions yay, and i do love a pwp, I just wanted to let you know that your story is a very enjoyable experience to read, just as it is, there were moments that I could not stop laughing at and moments that make me cry. (note: still need to get tissues for next chapter.) My freinds have even caught me giggling as a moment jumps back into my head at work. Needless to say I just wave them off and continue to giggle. ^_^. So ahem.........PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. *hypnotize swirlys appear........you want to continue and make a happy ending......you want to continue and make a happy ending........ (is it working yet?)* anyway looking forward to the next installment. (grabs tissue box, and chocolate) :O)
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  • From ANON - the smiley bandit on November 27, 2005
    nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! WHY DO ALL THE REALLY GOOD STORIES HAVE SAD ENDINGS.........please tell me either a this ends happy YAY or you gonna do a sequal that ends happy. sniff sniff sniff please. *gives big cute puppy dog eyes* sigh this is one of the best stories with this pair that I have read, and it looks like its gonna make me sob like a baby. *sniffs and walks away to stock up on tissue for the upcoming chapter. "will also need copious amounts of chocolate and something to snuggle against while reading. Why is she doing this to us." sniff sniff* you are so mean. grrrrrr.
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  • From ANON - Elric Maxwell on November 27, 2005
    'I would have thought that in our long association as siblings, that somewhere down the line you would have figured out that I am immune to your bullshit.' LMAO! That was priceless!!! I nearly spat out my soda on my laptop when I read that!

    That was genius, making Al something of a smartass! Hell, I'm still giggling now over how Havoc tried to blackmail Mustang, but due to his natural bad luck, couldn't even get any poon nanny if it brought to him! *laughing uncontrollably* I am loving this fic! It's like you have the right mix of angst and humor. Keep it up! EM ^_^
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  • From ANON - lady gray on November 27, 2005
    wow, just wow, holy crap that last chapter was just beautiful! I really hope you continue this to the post movie era, ie when Ed finally gets back, and Roy is Fuher... but even if you don't that was wonderful
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 27, 2005
    ;_; I have tears in my eyes. But the sex scene was totally beautiful
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