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Reviews for The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - CallistaSky on November 27, 2005
    Again, amazing. I love this and I am going to be so sad when it comes to an end.
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  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on November 27, 2005
    Oooh, I'm SO glad I managed to finish this chapter before I left. Squee!
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  • From ANON - Swinging Nippon on November 27, 2005
    Oh, I made a heart thing and it ate the rest of my comment -o-;

    But anyway! As I was saying after that heart and the internet ate the rest of it...
    You have great, great, GREAT writing. I don't know what that D/H person's thing is... because I don't think they know anything BECAUSE this whole Roy-and-Ed-are-really-just-masturbation-buddies is part of your plot, and you're doing it on purpose, and there IS a reason that they're not doing it. Anyway, it's great writing xD I can picture everything perfectly and I laugh when it's funny, I cry when it's sad, and you just capture the emotions so skillfully~. Wah, I wish I could write like this... @O@ Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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  • From ANON - Swinging Nippon on November 27, 2005
    Ah, I haven't reviewed your story before~ but I should've! It's great and wonderful and awesome and AHH I LOVE HOW YOU UPDATE IT EVERYDAY.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    May I add something to D/H's review.
    I understand what you're talking about, but you don't know anything. What the writer is doing is creating suspense, a thrill. You anticipate that they're going to have sex, but they don't, and it's supposed to frustrate you. It's supposed to eat you up so much that you have to come back and see if they finally get to it. It's a great strategy for a writer to do, and makes readers almost thrilled.
    This concludes my opinion.
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  • From ANON - angelofdeath47 on November 27, 2005
    I have to continue in an entirely new review. Damnit.
    The part where Ed leaves Roy tied to the bed was laugh out loud. He just runs out the door. God, I felt so sorry for the poor guy. Left alchemized to a bed unfinished.
    The story also had it's dramatic parts. Parts that just made you want to break down inside. And, I'm wondering if Chapter 15 is the last chapter. I'm not sure if you made it the last chapter or not. But, it seemed like a good finale. I would like an Epilogue, though. The story was great because it gets through to readers. You feel like you're actually there, and that's what makes it a fantastic piece.
    Well, that's it for me. I hope to see another chapter or Epilogue from you, and I'll also be looking for more stories by you.
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  • From ANON - angelofdeath47 on November 27, 2005
    Wow. I mean... wow. It's amazing. You're writing is great. One of the best stories I've ever read. Your voice is amazing, and how you keep the character's personalities in check throughout the story is talented. You keep to the actual story line, but add in your story through the whole plot. It's all so up to date, even to the last episodes.
    I was laughing through almost the entire story. It had a lot of funny quirks that were just hilarious. Like when Ed's about to say I love you, and Roy wakes up. 'There's meatloaf in the icebox.' That line was so funny, I couldn't get over it for days. Sorry if I sound like I'm exaggerating or going a little overboard.

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  • From ANON - Meroko on November 27, 2005
    Ohhh! This story is just amazing T_T It made me cry reading this part because I remembered how sad I was in the series! Please tell me that you're gonna write a sequel with Ed returning? Please? v_v I want him and Roy to be together. Together is nice. I'll sob miserably if they're not just like a tiny baby.

    Great story and I'm twisting in my seat to see the end of it. It's so sad v_v;
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  • From Fate on November 26, 2005
    Also, i want to just add that I, love the way you have done their sex life. If some readers dont like the way they havn't had sex yet then a pox on them. It seems all the more realstic that they havn't. Personal i live the way you dragged it out!
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  • From Fate on November 26, 2005
    Oh god I love you. And this Fanfiction. This is the most amazing Ed/Roy that i have ever read! Its funny, touching and wonderful! I love the way you've made Edward and Roy seem in here. And the things they get up to are so funny, its such a wonderful read. Its also so very touching, and so very sweet when it wants to be. I cant even begin to discribe how much i love this fanfiction ^_^ Apart from the fact i stayed up all night to read it because once started i could not close it. Please, please write more to this..its amazing and so are you!
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  • From ANON - Kelly on November 26, 2005
    OMG another GREAT one. I LOVE YOU! Ed feeling sad because Al couldn't like Milly was adorable. I could so see him doing that. Oh yeah and Ed being so controlling in bed! What a turn around... Now only if he'd go all the way!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you, for gracing us with this story!
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  • From ANON - lady gray on November 26, 2005
    wow, what a great story, the charactorization is awesome and the story is just plain hilerious.
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  • From ANON - Krystal_Epyon on November 26, 2005
    Great story! Really drew me in. I put off everything I had to do and still read despite the guy playing Silet Hill beside me. ^.^

    I would suggest, however, that you have this story beta'd. I was dissapointed by the may slips in tense ad several other errors that made this brilliant story a little annoying to read. I'm sure reading back over it would help, or if English is your second language ask someone else. I mean absolutely no offense, but it would make the story infinitely better and I think this one deserves that.

    Thanks for the entertainment. First fic I've read in a long time.
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  • From ANON - buhleted on November 26, 2005
    this is story so rocks! mustang's sweet and wants to confort ed. that's really all that matters...a happy ed. please oh god(AKA you) write more to this enticing story!!!...did i use enticing in the right context....damn english....
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 26, 2005
    that was sooo cute! I laughed out loud several times. ^0^ More? ^_~
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