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Reviews for The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - Kelly on November 26, 2005
    Holy shit. I usually never curse in my reviews, but this is just too damn good! I love this story, I love it more than any other fic I've read period. It's long, but it doesn't lose it's spark. Each chapter ends so perfectly, I just want more! Words cannot describe how impressed I am, no joke. I've been wanting to review every chapter as I read along, but I found it best to read all the chapters thus far first, then review. I have been reading this for about 3 days in intervals, which makes me happy because I love long stories. I love how you didn't stray away from the characters personalities. Oh god, this is a good one, and trust me I read a lot! So I know a good one when I see one, and this is by far the best! Wow, I could go on forever! All I can say right now is, please keep it up, and I'm looking looking forward to your next update! :)
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  • From ANON - CallistaSky on November 26, 2005
    Oh wow, this is fantastic! I've just started reading your story today and-unfortunately for me-I've been trapped here until I could read the whole thing. I couldn't stop! I love how you personify the characters; Roy and Edward in particular. It stays true to them in the show. Also, I like how you make it a point to keep up with the fact that Ed is still a kid. So many stories I've read have Edward as a master at sex after one lay. Or even worse, during his first lay. You keep it real, you ease them into it...and I applaud you for that!

    Also the various tortures you place Roy through yet have him keep coming back for more is hilarious yet adorable. The Colonel will do anything for the kid, so cute.

    I hope there is more, because honestly? You have me hooked.

    Thanks for the great read! Though my back is currently cursing this story...ow.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 26, 2005
    WOW...amazing...Ok...Big review...read it really really fast and you might get how i was feeling...lol

    I was like OH no! A bomb! and Poor Roy and Oh! Poor Ed...and NO don't leave Al there by himself...and then...and then...Roy was all like waking up and Al had come home so it was ok...and then Roy was ok and i was happy and it was good...but THEN he had to go to work and leave the boys in the house by THEMSELVES and THAT's a recipe for disaster!! And then Ed got all those bottles out after going through Roy's stuff and i was like No! Bad Ed! *slaps hands* But he drank it anyways and MY GOD...

    “You’re in for it now,” Ed shrieked behind him, “because Colonel Spanky has come to town!”


    I laughed...and laughed...and laughed and ...my god i had tears ROLLING down my face...it must have been a good 10 MUNUTES before i could start reading again... *shakes head* You are TALENTED! lmao

    And then and then...*shocked* he was chucking the phonographs everywhere and i was like NOOOO!!! *hands on cheeks* BAD EDWARD!!! and i laughed when Al had that frightened ramble to Roy on the phone...i do that sometimes... lol

    All in all...EXCEPTIONAL chapters!! I love this story BEYOND belief.. (yes...seriously...) If i owned the series i would make THIS fiction into a little series all of its own... *clasps hands* I love it so.

    Kepp up the...*insert good describe-y words here...lol...ajectives?*

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - buhleted on November 25, 2005
    this story is so adorable...and sexy...please tell me more chapters are coming out and soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chai-chan on November 25, 2005
    REALLY GOOD!!!Update soon, PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 25, 2005
    Aw, Ed, why do you have to be so bad. XD More more!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Sinistra (Too lazy to sign in) on November 24, 2005
    This has to be one of the most original takes on Ed and Roy getting together. I love the OC, and how she didn't take up too central of a role but was still important to the story. Your sence of humor is wonderful and Al is simply to die for. I love how witty you made him. I cannot wait to see more from you.

    ~Lady Sinistra

    P.S.- If you're looking for a fic to pass the time with, I am the author of 'Fraternazation' a Roy/Ed fic. I believe you'll enjoy it!
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 24, 2005
    Lol, sorry, that last 'anon' comment was me. :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    You had me totally scared there for a sec. o____o!! More?? more??? ^_________^
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  • From ANON - No one special on November 24, 2005
    That almost made me cry. Almost. Alright, there were a few tears who ... well ... streamed down my face.
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  • From ANON - someone on November 24, 2005
    that was....hiarious!...that is all
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 24, 2005
    Oh! Loved it! Awesome chapter!

    “How I relish the chance of actually missing you, FullMetal,” the Colonel said easily, “I’d really like to know what having a pain-free ass feels like.”


    this absolutely cracked me up! it's so awesome how they have this little dialogue when they're in the office...makes me laugh and go all 'squeal-y'

    And i loved the fact that Roy didn't go in for the...uh...well...score when he could have...cause i could tell it was from guilt too...lmao! YAY! Go ROY!!! *cheers*

    Hope to read another update soon!

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - Alice on November 24, 2005
    I adore this story ^_^ The best that I've ever read in this fandom! I check back for updates obsessively--it's really unhealthy ^_^; So update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 24, 2005
    Oh shiiiii that was incredible. No words.

    I love you!

    Marry me? :D :D :D
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  • From ANON - Naria on November 24, 2005
    I am overwhelmed by the genuine thought you put behind this very real fic! I couldn't get over how cute and stubborn Ed was, and how seductive and patient Roy was! You captured a very real relationship between these two! It wasn't unrealistically WAFFy and it wasn't so angsty you wanted to choke and die! I just could not get enough of this! You are a very talented author and I wish I could give you more compliments, but it just wouldn't do your work justice! ^_^ I REALLY look forward to any other stories you might be hiding/writing at the moment! Really, I'll hunt you down and review every one of em! You're work is refreshing and innovative, and most importantly, genuine. It's the little things that build a relationship, and you made that very apparent with this story. I really can't tell you how proud I am of you about their supposed "first time", because honestly, I don't think anyone would be comfortable in that situation, especially someone as headstrong as Ed! I'm also thrilled that you didn't make them fall into a sicky lust state where it seems like love, but it's not...what you built between them was authentic and deep. It made me go all nostalgic just thinking about it, and I remembered the imperfect first relationship I had! ^_^ So, I guess I want to say thank you for writing so wonderfully and sharing it with us common folk! It was a true pleasure!
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