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Reviews for The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher

By : Skydark1
  • From on November 24, 2005
    I must say that I'm quite in love with this. I love the humor in it but the fact that it also keeps the awkwardness of virgins. Ed's aversion (sp?) to cum amuses me greatly, and Mustang not wanting to waste it had me laughing aloud. I love the kink touch, and how it would be so like Ed to just leave Roy there and forget completely about him. I do like how you have people not exactly okay with their Adult/Child relationship at first. I've realized that many people have everyone just okay with it without thinking about the taboo and how many people find it disgusting. It was refreshing to see this and read it where people don't exactly take it with stride but try and overcome it. I love the witty sense of humor Al has in here and how he can one up Ed most of the time, and his knowledge of sex, as well as blutness with it, being larger than Ed's is too cute. The book reading is something I can seriously see him doing. Ed and Roy's banter is amusing, and I like how its in character with the two of them because its something they seem to do a lot. I cannot wait to see where you go with this, its mix of humor and angst has me intrigued as well as hooked *nodnod*
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  • From ANON - Di on November 23, 2005
    OM MY FING GOD! I laughed and cried my ass off! Superb! Brilliant! This is without a doubt one of the best stories I have read! The chemistry between Ed and Roy is absolutely amazing, and you've giveb Al a great deal of maturity while still maintianing himin character. I loved the kitty chasing scene, and when Ed left Roy tied up I literaly snorted water up my nose. Wow, just wow. More, please dear god more.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 23, 2005
    Awesome! Absolutely awesome!! LOVED that chapter!! Loved everything about it, especially the ending!!

    Keep up the amazing work!! I love this fiction!!

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - No one special on November 23, 2005
    I have to admit. This is the best Full Metal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read. You are a true star. Lol. Anyway. Keep on the good work. I really DO NOT want this story to end. ;)
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 23, 2005
    Oh god, the spanking scene was so wonderful. MORE OMG PLEEEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - hColleen on November 23, 2005
    Nicely done :D Very well written and characterized! Incredibly patient you are with Ed :D Simply wonderful.
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  • From ANON - thooruchan on November 23, 2005
    ok, just tell me how did you manage to make me like this fic if I hate Roy Mustang. Oh, yes, must be the wonderfull writting, or the hylarious bad sex scenes, or how cute you make Ed, or how patient Roy is. Yes, must be that.
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on November 23, 2005
    Oh. MY. GOD. I JUST have to say that this is BY FAAAAR the BEST and MOST wonderful FMA fiction i have EVER read!! I am at a complete loss to find the words to describe how much i love this story...everything about it...

    ...just...

    ...wow

    PLEASE keep updating! i check every day and absolutely LOVE the fact you update so quickly...*shakes head* i just can't get over how much i love this story...words fail me...

    Keep up the fantastically amazing work...

    Hellagoddess
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  • From ANON - Luminaris on November 23, 2005
    Love, love, love it! It just keeps getting better and weirder all the time! Made me laugh out lout in a library crowded with people, quite embarrassing... Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Jonquina on November 23, 2005
    Oh my god, this fic is so good! It has every element in it, and it's insanely funny! I am eagerly waiting for more...good job!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 22, 2005
    HAHAHAHAHA! Poor Roy...and poor Ed when Roy gets back at him later. Good job i love this chapter. can't waite for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2005
    hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha LOL LOL ROTGL
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  • From ANON - Lolichan on November 22, 2005
    Incredibly hot, but so so so evil. MORE MORE PLEAAASE!! *begs*
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  • From ANON - Kagayaku on November 22, 2005
    That was a wonderful story. Why?

    1) Had a plot, and a good one
    2) It was realistic...romance, comedy, with a small touch of angst and not overly romantic. It was very relaxed and sweet
    3) Great writing style, I found myself both leaning forward completely absorbed and laughing outloud.

    Great piece of work! Please write again soon!
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  • From ANON - Werwolfie on November 22, 2005
    I am amazed at the quality of this story. The only thing that saddens me is that roy has never just bent ed over and done him right out. Maybe soon eh ^_^
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