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Reviews for Trapped

By : HitsuragiWidow
  • From ANON - Red Tail on October 11, 2006
    updaaaaaate! This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read!

    in Liebe, Red Tail
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  • From ANON - Red Tail on September 03, 2006
    Amazing! Simply amazing! ^________^ *glomps author* I love this story! The flashbacks are timed perfectly with the story!

    in Liebe, Red Tail
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  • From ANON - Fantasy or Reality on January 30, 2006
    Please update again soon. It's really good. Want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - priscel on January 24, 2006
    Ireally do enjoy this story, the whole thing about Duo being blond in the beginning I overlooked, but yea um.. Duo has chestnut hair... but the story and the interplay between Heero and Duo is wonderful so please, please update this baby soon!
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  • From ANON - priscel on January 24, 2006
    *screams @ chapter II* man... no ...*sniffles*


    I love the little chapter lessons
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  • From ANON - priscel on January 24, 2006
    'Lesson of the Chapter: Watching Heero’s ass will get you into trouble...'

    Haha yea! lol I just read the first chapter, that's pretty good. I like and i'm so happy that there's two more chapters to read.
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  • From ANON - dark_mistress on January 24, 2006
    heero will make it right......? please let it be so! update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Anya on January 23, 2006
    HI!!!!
    A very good story - but for Pit's sake, give Duo his hair colour back - he's not blond, he's hair is chestnut - and it's very confusing to read.
    I love your chapter lessons very much – esp. the last one, dildo should be really huge for that.
    Anyways, hope you'd continue soon - dying to read more and find out how's Heero. BTW - I'm not very bright, so could you explain who made the love confession - Heero or Duo??
    Hugs

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2006
    Well it's interesting so far, though I don't recall Duo's hair being blonde. It's more a chestnut I believe. My only criticism is that it's kind of hard to read because all the sentences and paragraphs are joined together like one big long paragraph - there is no spacing. If possible, try to put some spacing between your paragraphs.
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