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Reviews for Unnerving Discovery

By : Hellagoddess
  • From Dragon7 on January 25, 2007
    I see that you only post two chapters for story Please continue with this it. I am a big mpreg fan so please keep on writing and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Krya on November 30, 2005
    okay, this has bardock in it. a prenant one. i always like to see bardock! =O
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  • From ANON - saffron on November 29, 2005
    i like it pleas keep going
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  • From ANON - malimillions on November 28, 2005
    WOAH. O___O

    You have -got- to continue!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 27, 2005
    nice me like the chapater i can't wait to see how bordack survives or if he survives.
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 27, 2005
    Wow.... So discriptive. I've been on hills like that before, and you wrote that so amazingly life like. I hope you contiunue with suck depth of detail through out the story (even if that makes it so much longer than you had planned.)

    Well done! I can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 27, 2005
    This could get very interesting. Keep writing! I hope Bardock and the baby are okay! And could the father be the King....I can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - leaf on November 27, 2005
    Oh my, poor Bardoc! Please continue. It seems that your grammar and story line are good, which makes the story itself good and I can't wait to see where this thing is going.
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