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Reviews for The Second Time

By : Helenamorelli
  • From RenaTsukino on September 26, 2010
    I really liked this. It was very short, simple an sweet.

    However, I think you put the last chapter (chapter 4) on the wrong story. It looks like it belongs on your "Untamed" story. Just thought you should know.
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  • From Sunburst on December 26, 2009
    Thoroughly enjoyed this! Thanks! Very original
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  • From apogee on September 30, 2007
    that was so hot update soon!
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  • From ANON - Polymer on December 06, 2005
    I read this story on Insaiyan and I absolutely love it. The way in which you described Bulma and Vegeta gave me crystal clear pictures in my head. Also the humor had me laughing along with the excellent character depth. Having Vegeta and Bulma interact in their 'old' forms was priceless. I can't wait to see a sequel. I think one of my favorite moments was the description of how he realized he was wearing a scouter, next to the afterglow scene when t hey'd made love. So many good things I enjoyed about the story it's hard to name them all here!
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on November 28, 2005
    This is a great story, I love it! Keep writing!
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