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Reviews for Better Living Through Alchemy

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - Ravengirl on December 10, 2006
    Can't... breathe... from laughing. Oh my god, that bar scene was so priceless and somehow, so canon. Laughed until I cried.
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  • From ANON - sarah on December 07, 2006
    OMG!!!!!
    THIS IS THE BEST WRITING I HAVE EVER READ. NO SERIOUSLY.

    i don't think i have ever read anything that is so funny, adventurous, dangerous, mysterious, playful and sexy all rolled into one!

    you MUST read this whatever you do.

    ah! i think i'm in love XD

    seriously. there are no words worthy of this writing.

    just... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MissNoManners on December 06, 2006
    More, NOW!!!! =}
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  • From ANON - AnA La Pana83 on November 28, 2006
    Man, that was sooooooo good!! I haven't read an EdxRoy fic that thorough before! I loved every frickin'chapter. You made their relationship seem so beleivable. This made me read the prior story and i loved that one too! Now i know where to go to when i wanna get an EdxRoy fic fix, hehe. Tight work, and do continue to write!
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on November 28, 2006
    I love it, I love it, I always do! While I feel for Al, any guy, or girl for that matter, who says they were great at sex the first time is either delusional or lying. He'll get better. Practice, practice practice! And Ed is so cute when he's drunk.
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  • From ANON - dana on November 25, 2006
    i really can't remember if i left a review for roy mustang sex ed teacher or not. but i really loved it. i mean i have reread that story as well as better living through alchemy at least 10 times each and i am so pumped that you have updated better alchemy through living. i liked how you keep them in character ( the crazy personalities that we all love so well) while giving them more depth that did not conflict but actually complemented the way they were originally created. i love this story so much that i cannot wait to see how it ends and yet i know i will be sad when it does.
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  • From ANON - Athena! on November 23, 2006
    Yay! New chapter! Been waiting patiently and you have delivered! *bows down before your greatness* I greatly enjoyed this installment, Al's thought processes never fail to make me smile, especially when he goes 'file hunting." Though i miss the old armor Al... the one who was the guidence for Ed.. sigh... I know he had to go away, but he was just so great.

    The bar scene was great too! Havoc and Breda cracked me up! And sober Mustanga's "I'm standing right here..."

    I'm curious as to what's gonna happen with Gluttony too. To tell the truth, I'd totally forgotten about him.Glad you didn't! That's what i like about your writing, all the little details. Because really, it's the little details that set apart the good from the fantastic.. and plot/pacing, but that's a whole 'nother discussion.

    Yay for Al.. he finally got some. Heheh.. the ending of his 'tryst' with Riza was made extra funny by the fact that i had just watched 'the 40 yr Old Virgin' before reading this. Love the story!
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  • From ANON - TreeStar on November 23, 2006
    Hey, quick add on... Whatever happened to Wrath? I mean, i know he was chopped up and frozen, but he's not GONE exactly... Will Gluttony and Lust go after him... As insane as he was by the end? Because what's the military doing with him? Seriously, he knows stuff that could get Ed and Al seriously in trouble! And he's got a grudge against the boys. I can understand why chapter 21 took a while coming. it seems you had quite a few plot points to deliver and lay out. (I see when i read how you lay out your points knowing where the story is going, so before you can start the next Arc, you need to know where it will end, because it's all so seamless.)
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  • From ANON - TreeStar on November 23, 2006
    This is such an amazing story, truly, it is.
    Poor Al, I feel bad for him. He's inadvertantly embarrassed himself in front of Riza so many times... Maybe they deserve some equal groud, huh?
    I love how you captured Riza's desire in chapter 21. It reminded me a lot of Roy's thought pattern in Sex Ed Teacher. I have been wondering just where her feelings for Al stood, so this was an especially wonderful glimpse of that.
    Quick to cum and quick to fall asleep afterward... must be a young Elric thing. Al should develop his impressive teenage-body-recovery-time soon. Then she can really teach him some things, and even vise-versa. The more aggressive without actually being forceful Alphonse was done really well.
    You do excellent hetro scenes, and that just makes this story so much more intruiging. So much diversity!
    And now Gluttony is in the picture, and a possible Lust character. That's a really fascinating twist.
    And I'm really eager to see hwo the Prince plans to manipulate Ed through Al. It's Ed's weakspot, for sure, but will things be better or worse in the end for the five key people that would be involved? As Al said, it can't really be happily ever after until Brother is better.
    Will they end up in Xing? Because THAT'S something that I would LOVE to see. It would shake up the scene and has so much potential to make things insanely unpredictable.
    And the BIG question... Will Ed shave that weird thing off? :)
    Actually i'm dying most to find out more about Al and Riza's trip, and how they will remedy the too-fast problem they had their first night.
    Amazing job!
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  • From ANON - kikiko on November 22, 2006
    good grief...chapter 21 was a long time coming but holy cow...it was good!! I hope we don't have to wait as long for 22 O_O that'd be awful...

    loved the Al/Riza bits XD

    anyway hurry up and get the next installemt...the wait is killing me

    kiki
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  • From ANON - aspiker on November 22, 2006
    And score Al does! 8-) You did a great job writing Al's first time. Now, all Riza needs is her bit... ;-)

    Adding Gluttony to your list of characters is a good plot twist. I'm looking forward to see where this takes you...
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  • From ANON - shinimegami23 on November 20, 2006
    please tell em that chapter 20 is not the last chapter, please please please. It is way too good of a stroy to end like that, I wann aknow what happens to them for the rest of their lives, or at elast for a few more years. *pleading looks* I am totally hooked to your work and I must say I am quite pleased there is a fan fiction author running around that has this much talent, ever thought of publishing? Because I'd liek to read some more of your stuff.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2006
    and by this chapter, I mean chapter 17. sorry
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  • From ANON - shinimegami23 on November 20, 2006
    I don't know if you realize this, but most of this whole chapter is in italics, and I don't think it's supposed to be, sorry if it is though, it was just kind of confusing. And also, this is a tremendious sequal, the first story was excellent and this one is tremendous.
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  • From ANON - PJ on November 16, 2006
    holy shit.

    do you know how amazing that was?
    i laughed, i cried, my heart was broken, then fixed, then broken again, then some more laughter. that was FANTASTIC! From the very beginning to the start of the sequel to the end, I loved every minute of it. The best one I've ever read. holy cow.

    you really, really, really, really, really, REALLY should continue this. and I mean really. ! PLEASE do.
    wow.
    FABULOUS!!

    love much, pj
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