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Reviews for Better Living Through Alchemy

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - animebaby15 on January 22, 2006
    Awesome. Can't wait for more!! You own my soul!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 22, 2006
    Great chapter and if before i ended up reviewing you know you had 69 reviews!! BWA!HA!HA!HA!HA! Get it get it!! 69!!! OMG!! I was laughing and then reading the yumminess! XD Awesome chapter. Update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Marie on January 18, 2006
    I just wanted to know whether you were planning on continuing this story.. I really hope you do! I think I can honestly say that this is the best Fullmetal Alchemist fic I've ever read here in Aff.net and also in ff.net.. You have a flair with words even I as a fellow writer can't hope to match! :) And I really like your take on the relationship of Roy and Ed.. It's your prerogative to decide whether to continue this story... but I really, really am hoping you will! Thanks and have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - laurelle on January 16, 2006
    I love your story, and i love how you portray ed and roy so well. i cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on January 15, 2006
    I know you're probably very busy with work and other things but please PLEASE continue with and finish this fic! This and "The Adventures . . ." are just so funny and sad and touching and beautiful (not to mention really hot) they make up for every FMA badfic I've read. I was glued to both fics, having to read them straight through, and I can't wait for more. The story is wonderfully written and crafted and it would be terrible if it were left unfinished, even though I know how hard it is to write when life gets in the way but PLEASE try and update soon! (Oh, and I'm really hoping Ed doesn't cheat on Roy with the prince.)
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  • From ANON - Catherine on January 14, 2006
    Please, please, PLEASE update this again! I'm dying to know what happens in the next chapter! And I miss reading this story so much! This one and Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher are the best FMA fics I've EVER read. If you do not update soon, I will probably cry. ;_;

    Thank you for the stories that you've shared with us so far, and please finish so we can find out what happens too!
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  • From ANON - Magick on January 10, 2006
    I completely agree with everyone else. I just picked this up about a week ago and was hooked. I've told all of my slasher friends to read this and I've checked daily, multiple times, for updates. I'm waiting (impatiently) for the next chapter and I hope you continue to write.
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  • From ANON - the smiley bandit on January 08, 2006
    sigh.............. still no update............... *big dramatic sigh*
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  • From ANON - Angry Lephracaun on January 03, 2006
    Hey, for starters I think you're a fucking genious. I ate it all up, first i read The Adventures of Colonel Roy Mustang and I just finished reading BLTA. I even read that 'long-lost chapter'. Anyway I laughed, I cried, I was turned on, I got angry and jelous, and I even cried a little... I think. I think these would make great romance novels if you altlered things a bit, then again you do whatever you want. Just PLEASE update soon i know the story isnt over so just don't stall too long. I also dont want you to rush because then it wont turn out as good. I'm gonna be checking daily for updates, or maybe weekly. If you don't update in the next month ur ass is mine. I'll haunt you till you breathe your last breath. I'm fucking serious!

    P.S. I loved the way you didn't make the characters too OC. Even though Roy and Ed settled down, Ed's still a short-tempered hot blonde and Roy is still coy as hell! I wish I knew you personally so I could kiss your feet and maybe even the ground you walk on. Much love and take care! AND ALSO HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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  • From ANON - Mitsuki-chan on December 31, 2005
    Pleeeeease update this soon! I've read all of both stories and I was so excited at the end of this chapter! I really want to see what happens between Ed and the Prince and I just can't begin to describe how amazing that this story has been! I hope to see another chapter soon ^_________^
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  • From ANON - R-chan on December 30, 2005
    I just love you so much.
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  • From ANON - Skydark on December 29, 2005
    Answering Sciezka's Comment

    I have another question. Roy would run for Prime Minister? I thought in a parliamentary system, he's supposed to run for a seat in the House first, preferably under some powerful political party. A parliamentary system is supposed to be a clash of parties, isn't it? They would vie for the most number of seats, and the leader of the party with the most seats would be Prime Minister. Can you clear this up for me? I would be delighted if you would obliged, as I've come to really admire your work.

    I'll be totally honest, as an american I only know that it was said at the end of the series that the Amerstis Military handed over power to the Parlament (misspelled I'm sure). I write this with a massive grain of salt, I do not know anything about the parliamentary system. I can suspend my own belief because I can say that this isn't our world, and things are run differently. I beg your indulgence on the same. I'm calling it Parlament and writing a more American system of government. Forgive me =)
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  • From ANON - sciezka on December 28, 2005
    Many multichaptered RoyEd fics I know are either awful, incomplete, or just a series of drabbles. Finally I found something that is very well-written and has a good plot to boot. I like the depiction of Roy and Edward's relationship, they seem like a real couple with real problems yet their love for each other could never be doubted. The dialogue and interaction is lots of fun too. I've got to admit I'm not comfortable with dominant Edward at times, but then give and take is part and parcel of a healthy relationship. I'm supposed to hate third parties, but Ling is quite likable. Just don't let Ed sleep with the guy.

    The idea of Alphonse and Riza had me raising an eyebrow, but it takes some getting used to. I wish Ed had female pupils, though. He'd be a hit among them. Doesn't the academy accept girls?

    I have another question. Roy would run for Prime Minister? I thought in a parliamentary system, he's supposed to run for a seat in the House first, preferably under some powerful political party. A parliamentary system is supposed to be a clash of parties, isn't it? They would vie for the most number of seats, and the leader of the party with the most seats would be Prime Minister. Can you clear this up for me? I would be delighted if you would obliged, as I've come to really admire your work.

    I'm eagerly expecting another update and trying very hard to conceal my impatience. By the way, I also liked "The Adventures of Roy Mustang:Sex Ed Teacher". Thanks very much and keep up the good work, Sky Dark-san!
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  • From ANON - Ingonyama on December 26, 2005
    If possible, even more enthralling than the first. You pick completely new directions for the characters to take and change their lives around them, while still maintaining the feel of both their personalities and the world around them. I never would have figured Alphonse and Riza to be good for each other, but I hope that relationship keeps going as it has; it's a wonderfully natural progression of their once-professional friendship.

    Thanks for finishing off the leftover Homunculi. I'm REALLY looking forward to the Alchemy exhibition!
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  • From ANON - Terry on December 24, 2005
    Just wanted to say tht your update was great again, and thank you for the one-shots that will occupy my time until the next chapter of Better Living. Happy Holidays!
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