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Reviews for Better Living Through Alchemy

By : Skydark1
  • From ANON - Terry on December 15, 2005
    I knew it would be terrible, but...DAMN! I almost cried No with Ed. Keep up this amazing fic.
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on December 15, 2005
    Once again, claps for the phenomenal speed and quality of the updates... in other news OMG, envy. poor poor ed...
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  • From ANON - Arra on December 15, 2005
    WHAT THE HELL!? NOOOOO! Please let them be friends again!? I'll fucking kick that fucking bastard Ling's ass till the end of the world! You have to update soon, this drives me crazy. Please please please update. And that scene when they dance in the kitchen.. Awww.. So awesome, cute, brilliant, you name it. And I really hope they get some of that cake soon. Lol. I love you. And your story. Please update. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Ri on December 15, 2005
    Gasp!!! OMG!! GAH!!! Update!! I mean i am in lost of words!! I mean hearing the last sentence Ed said...OMG!!!! I am speechless!! CHAPTER NOW!! NOW!!!!!! *grabs author my the collar and shakes violently* NOW!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on December 14, 2005
    Awesome as usual!! so cool, i love jealous Roy and the prince is starting to grow on me. interesting plotline btw, and evil Cliffy!! update soon
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  • From ANON - kirameki on December 14, 2005
    Ah~h! What a horrible cliffie you leave us with. >o< What will happen. Ah, I wanna know. Can't wait til your next update. x3
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  • From ANON - oriko yume on December 14, 2005
    I eagerly await each chapter. Your writing is very captivating and the attention to detail really brings everything to life. So many people forget about the little details that go into making a story more then just words on paper. I think it's all the small things that really bring a story and it's characters to life. You write the kind of long, intricately involved stories that I love to read. They bring out so many emotions, happiness, sadness, even tears occasionally. When I write (though I only write for my own selfish self, not being bold enough to brave the lion's den, because I want to put out work that people read and say wow, I want more), these are the types of stories I like to write. Stories where you feel that the characters are more then words on paper, stories that begin, go somewhere and end, whether happily ever after or not. So, keep up the great work and after this is finished, I hope that we will see more works of art from you. You truly do weave the dream into life.
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  • From Crya2Evans on December 14, 2005
    Man, that was intense! I loved it! I can't wait for you to update again!
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  • From ANON - Terry on December 14, 2005
    OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! That was too intense. Wow, you drive me crazy. That was worth the extra wait. Oh my god that didn't just happen. Wow. Ok, I'm okay now, you're a freaking fantastic writer! Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - kirameki on December 14, 2005
    I've been bad and haven't been reviewing as I should. I've been up to my eyeballs in finals. Just wanted to let you know you're daily updates have been keeping me somewhat sane. >x< I'll review better when I have the time, just wanted to let you know how much I love this series. In fact I read it all the way through even though I should've been working. xD
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  • From ANON - Rachael on December 14, 2005
    Oh splendid! This is splendid! Your characterizations are amazing, and I just love your storyline. You're a very captivating writer, (you don't even have too many typos, which I notice, seems to happen a lot in on-line fanfics), and your detail is visual and striking. I really liked the discussions between "Al" and "Alphonse." I thought that that was a brilliant idea and also brilliantly executed. You're very witty, and that comes out through your writing. I like that you've stayed true to the characters, but at the same time you've fleshed them out very well, portraying a believable view of what they all might be like post-series. I am very much assuming that this is uncompleted, (I haven't checked the status on-line--I got so wrapped up in the story that I haven't taken the time) because I really want to know where Ed was for those six years, how things play out with the prince, and whether Al and Hawkeye get together. I'm sure Roy's machinations will also be interesting to see. I've also read "The Adventures of Roy Mustang, Sex Ed. Teacher," which was a delight, and I really appreciate that even though you have a nice catharsis of melancholy worked in, you still gave us readers a happy ending. I (despite what certain friends say) do NOT think happy endings are overrated, and I trust that you will finish this piece wringing heart strings along the way before wrapping things up in a delightfully surprising yet totally sensical and happy way. You are truly superb! (and *sigh* I don't talk like this, I just write like this, but I felt like I should take the time to bend my intelligence to my benefit to give you a well-worded and well-deserved review. So don't think me a dork for my vocabulary, which, to be fair to me, is what you see when I actually think before I iterate ideas). So time has been taken, and I hope that this review somewhat relays my pleasure at this, hmm, I think I can justifiably say literary piece. Frankly I would point out that I have read published novels that are not up to par with this piece. You're plotweaving is dynamic and exceptional (and a bit enviable), and I have stay I'm a stalwart fan and I hope to see more of this story soon!

    Sincerely yours
    Rachael
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  • From ANON - lady gray on December 13, 2005
    great update, i love the sneaky prince, so determined, about dang time roy figured out what was going on and decided to do something. love sarah, what a great character.
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on December 13, 2005
    Your powers of update astound me,
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  • From ANON - wayfarer=redemption on December 13, 2005
    is al going to be with hawkeye or is his going to be with someone else?or is it going to be a surprise
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  • From ANON - Terry on December 13, 2005
    You're killing me Skydark! Roy knows Ling is after Ed, Ed knows Ling is after him, and Ling knows they know! However, I'm happy the party went off without incident, but at times I was twitching! Great job!The dance between Roy and Ed was so sweet, I swooned. Reason number 3,456 why Ling CANNOT have Ed. I love Roy's wheeling ways. Can't wait for tomorrow's update!
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