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Reviews for A Trip to the Future

By : Jennji
  • From saiyajinxyz on April 13, 2008
    Yikes! This was an interesting story about what Future Trunks life could have been like after he had returned to the future. It's sad that everyone treated him like garbage except for Goku. And I appreciate how much you made the present time Vegeta caring and concerned for his son. Also, having Goku tell Bulma to blow it out her ass was a great moment. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel. I hope Trunks life improves in the past.
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  • From jamielee on February 06, 2006
    now this i like, this story bwas so cool future veget a was a real prick.
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  • From ANON - Passing by a fourth time on February 04, 2006
    Yes! A SEQUEL A SEQUEL SEQUEL ME WANT ONE!

    Hehe, so it was Goku the one that punched Vegeta... The Prince would be too confused punching his own self. :-)
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  • From ANON - freewater on February 03, 2006
    Brilliant! Yes! Do the sequal! I would love to see Mirai trying to cope with a family that in another time hated him. The rehab thing was a neat idea too, I was sort of hoping that he and Goku would get together in this one. I don't know, I think it was because of the way Goku said he missed Mirai in the first chapter. But either way, it was still great, and the part where little Trunks asking Mirai if he could read his thoughts was too cute. I laughed. Great work, I'll be on the look out for your other stories!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on January 12, 2006
    Awesome chapter.. very good!

    Thanks for updating so quickly by the way.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - Hikari on January 12, 2006
    Now I'm curious. Please continue. ._.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 12, 2006
    Interesting story. I wonder what happend outside.

    More please.
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  • From ANON - Passing by a third time on January 11, 2006
    My my Goku is in deep shit... or is it Trunks?
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  • From ANON - Freewater on January 11, 2006
    At first when you portrayed Trunks as a druggie I sort of sighed and shook my head thinking, 'This is just going to be another one of thos stories where the main character is all depressed for no good reason. 'Oh, boo hoo, I saved the world and everyone is now happy and healthy and loves me for the effort'' But then I decide to read the next chapter anyway to see what's there and it's all like WHAM right in my face how awsome it is. I love the idea of the family that Trunks wanted so much to shun him. Chi-Chi is a bitch, and she's just angry because she lost her only child, and as for Gohan, the explanation you gave was enough. He only dies because he was stuck training Trunks after he just would not stop crying and begging for it. So if that was the true reason then he would be a little pissed off. It would be like a brick in the stomach for Trunks to hear that though, and Gohan should realise that no one forced him to rush off with his arm freshly cut off to fight the androids. Trunks even tried to stop him!

    Maybe I can understand Bulma's reactions to all this. She just got her husband and friends back from the dead, so if at first they all seem kind of rude to her boy then she probably just shrugs it off thinking, 'They don't really mean it' and, 'He's a tough kid' Or something along those lines, after all if they just got back then she wouldn't want to start anything with them, but then you get into how Trunks turned down CC and lets her in on his sexuality, and she's really pissed off to the point where she doesn't care. I think Vegeta is just being Vegeta. He didn't grow up like the other Vegeta since he was dead and never got to know his son. So that maturity is missing and makes him pretty In-Character.

    I'm curious about Goku, will Vegeta confront him and will Goku deny that he ever had a thing for Trunks, thereby breaking his heart and sending him off to drugs? Or were the drugs provided by his family as a way to waste away without their having to bother with him? (if that makes any sense) I've got this story on my recommended reading, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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  • From ANON - Camaro on January 05, 2006
    Wow, I never realized just how good this was! I hope you update soon, it's awesome.

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on January 04, 2006
    OMG!! Poor Poor Trunks!!!! Thank god Goku's still kind. UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Flidar on December 19, 2005
    Really nice idea, I never thought of Boo in the future... It´s a real good way to start this story.

    I wonder what will happen after Trunks finishes his tale. I can imagine a funny scene, though:

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    *Trunks just finished and everything is quite*

    Vegeta: *is pretty pissed & stands up* ... *chi radiates anger*

    Trunks: *looks away thinking Vegeta is mad at him*

    Goku: Vegeta? Were are you going?

    Trunks: Huh? *looks up startled*

    Vegeta: *while calmly marching to the door* Teaching myself a lesson or two.

    *add great battle scene with many explosions and two pissed Vegetas here*

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    And yes, I think our normal and 'good' (as good as he can get) Vegeta would win. Then they´d take Trunks with them and try to sort out his problems in a 'better environment'. ^^ I really hope he´s going to get better soon.

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  • From ANON - Passing by a second time on December 16, 2005
    Oh, well, that explains it. Bulma should get over it non-the-less, why doesn't she adopt garndchildren? Wait, can male saiyans and half-saiyans have babies in this fic?

    Yeah yeah yeah it's Mirai Trunks and Goku, Mirai Trunks and Goku, Mirai Trunks and Goku, oh yeah I love this pairing!!!

    One thing I request, when you talk about Mirai Trunks in his own timeline, don't call him "Mirai", he's name is Trunks. It's one thing to read the name when he's in the past where there also is Chibi Trunks, but when you'r talking exclusively about the future timeline, it sounds weird to hear him being refered to as Mirai all the time.


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  • From ANON - a-nonny-nonny on December 16, 2005
    It's "dilemma". No, really.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on December 15, 2005
    For anyone who reads the reviews frist I really liked the later chapters just because the first chapter was foreboding the rest of the story and you wonder why Trunks is like that. Okay I know I do not have eloquence when typing my comments but if you like writing this story I think you should just write it and say it is OOc so you won't get flamed like those other two reviewers. Looking forward to you next chapters if you are not so discouraged.
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