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Reviews for Big Ol Texas Soul

By : Memme
  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on December 28, 2005
    Omfg, it's a blashpemy-- I'm not signed in! o.O;

    @ Ch. 1
    Anywhoozle... wow. I mean DAMN, woman! You're amazing on so many levels. I just now noticed this one and I'm intrigued to read it. But I've only got time for this chapter tonight. (Watching Underworld with my dad and my man, then I have to do a stupid report for my theatre class -- grr -- and work on a fan-manga for Florville (it's so fun! ^_^). Somewhere in there, I need to squeeze in editing a chapter of TR for you. Eheheh... ^_^;

    Not the Duo! You have harmed him! -_-; Well, I guess that's acceptable; he's not dead. XD And I love how this is set it Texas, seeing as I'm a Texan. w00t. But where have all the coywboy-types gone? Sure, there are FFAand Ag. guys with that build, but none of the daring die-for-your-woman characteristics you described in the opening paragraphs. *sniffle* Ah, well. As long as I have my wonderful boyfriend to suddenly scoop me in his arms and make me feel dainty and fragile, all is well. ^^ I love my army man!

    It sapped all energy to read this one chapter and I had to reconnect just to put in thois review, but it's worth it. As usual, I'm swept away in your detail and portrayal of the characters, just like in Howard's Boi. Of course, this one's more serious and the first time I've read Duo'd dialogue containing the word "fuck". o_o Amazing. Okay, enough sweet-talk. Love ya, dear. Read more later. ^_^
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  • From Zuzanny on December 28, 2005
    (3) I really, really enjoyed this fic. I hope Duo comes to terms with what happened to him, and Heero. I felt really sad for Duo when he wasn't getting a key. I look forward to reading more! Soon, I hope. :)
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  • From ANON - memine on December 20, 2005
    moooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~`. ^__^ I love this fic very much. The details and personality came off very well. My favorite of all is the take of things from the office lady gossiping with each other. XD I hope you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - SeYa on December 15, 2005
    This is a great piece of reading hope to see more very soon he he. Keep up the good work
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  • From jukeboxcsi on December 14, 2005
    I have enjoyed this so far, though I kinda agree with the other person on some of the first two chapters being a little much with the other characters (the non-GW characters). But, this last chapter was really great. Probably because it focused more on Duo, Heero, and Wufei too. I'm so curious what happened to Duo and also what his past is like. And that bit about Quatre? I'm confused on if Quatre kept Duo or Quatre talked Heero into keeping Duo for reasons beyond Heero's reasons or...? Guess we'll find out in future chapters. Hope it's not too long before you update again!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2005
    Well, it's disappointing you won't be updating often on this because I'd like to see where you take it - what happened to Duo to change him so and such. Your changing of tenses (past tense in places, present tense mostly everywhere else) makes for a confusing read because of the distraction of the changing tenses. Unless the past tense areas are flashbacks (which they should be labeled as such if so), then try to stick with one or the other (I prefer past tense because it's easier to read and visualize the scene). Also, to me, you are spending a tad too much time with description and background details of OCs that have extremely minor roles. I find myself skimming over several paragraphs at a time just to get to the point (the meat of the story). I don't really care that John, who has absolutely nothing to do with the story, is an ex-accountant who sometimes visits the KitnKaboodle club because his life is void of pleasure and he's trying to recapture his youth while his wife considers divorcing him because she has found love in the arms of the next door neighbor Paul, a well endowed man of fifty with greying sideburns, who is the electrician in charge of a local company named Titan Electric (I know that's not in the story - it's just an example). So, you might consider easing up on that a bit, imho. But, for the most part, it's well written and, aside from having to plug through the murkiness of the OCs' lives, intriguing.
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