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By : ibshafer
  • From ANON - Kelly on January 21, 2006
    I wanted to review this last night (more like this morning :P), but I couldn't connect with the database or something along those lines. I know that I had to come back and review this, you deserve it, this rocks. Anyway I love Roy/Ed. They are so, so very hot togehter! I also have to say that this is one of those fics I can say that I enjoy not only for the yaoi aspect, but for the writing style as well.^^ Another thing I like about this fic, is how you make it seem like it could have actually happened, the way you work in the actual storyline. If only us yaoi fans could get a hold of the rights to FMA! *snif*Please do keep it, I am LOVING this! =)
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  • From ANON - ibshafer on January 06, 2006
    milky: mutual hero worship. Cool... I truly love your writing style and wish I could create the kind of images you do... Along with Operant Conditioning and Hold the Cherry, I've just read and been wowed by Unexpected. So wonderful. You also are my hero for leading me, through your recommendations list, to the most incredible (and inadequately named) piece of fan fiction I have ever read - the sweet, funny, romantic, exciting, hot, hot, HOT Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher... Skydark is brilliant. I've already left her copious starstruck feedback, so I won't burble on here further except to send a "thanks!" to you for pointing me in her direction. As for LJ, I *am* a member, but was just banned from the FMA yaoi for having the audacity to ask a question... (Any "non-content" posting is, apparantly, considered spam... Great! I'm now lumped in the same category as the folks trying to sell Viagra over the internet and those people from Nigeria hoping to get someone to help them with their money problems...) While I was embarrassed and confessed my idiocy (and most people were very helpful and nice), I didn't immediately beg forgiveness for my indiscretion, so one of the mods offed me... Which is sad because I really wanted to spend a lot of time there. I do have an account, though, but am a little rusty on LJ. Be nice to hook-up with you, and some of the other smart, talented FMA people on LJ...

    Pickles: Can't remember if I answered this already, but I've found a ton (92, actually) of doujinshi at RizaHawkeye.com. They down-load page-by-page and many are translated into English. Some very wonderful stuff there, whatever your 'ship interests... I think all of them are pretty much NC-17, just so's you know.

    pepp: Hey, honey! How you doing? Getting sleep, eating good, got that drooling problem under control? :D I'm working on the ending for Undiscovered, but have momentarily handed over control of my brain functions to a little, epic fic called The Adventures of Roy Mustang: Sex Ed Teacher, written by Skydark. Hard to think about writing more myself when there is such perfect perfection out there... You should check it out if you haven't already. And the sequel, Better Living Through Alchemy is already up to 16 chapters. Check her out, girl! You'll be glad you did...

    OnyxLight: Thanks! So! Much! Every fic I read, I learn a little more... Which is not to say [cough, cough] that I plagiarize, mind you, (NO WAY!!) but that seeing how other people handle it, inspires me to add more detail and more...heat.

    Sasu: I like the Roy dominance thing, but I think I like unexpected dominance even more. And an Ed that knows what he wants and goes after it, is a mighty fine thing indeed. Expect Fullmetal to take some control of the situation in the next chapter. BTW, I agree with you - how does one "own" Ed?


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  • From ANON - Sasu on January 06, 2006
    oh yeah! Roy and Ed make so fine pair! They just match :D And dominance is always good, well, Roy was trying to take the dominance, but we don't care :D Ed is so strong person, that owning him would be really diffigult.
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  • From ANON - OnyxLight on January 05, 2006
    That was one of the hotest scenes I have read in a long long time...Well done!
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 04, 2006
    *cracks, laughing her butt off*

    ^^lol Yes, I suppose a trip to staples is something on my to-do list! ^^ And I can see where the not getting the 'me-time' would bother new mothers... ^^ My ma was really crazy after my baby sis was born... I was stuck baby-sittong while she and my step-dad would go out, so I didn't get much free time when she started going out again...

    Taking your time with the next chapter is a-ok with me! It just makes it all the better!! lol And i can understand that you would need to 'scope out the competition', so to speak, by looking at other stories... *winks*

    I can wait for the next chapter! Or I shall try to at least... And i took your advice in trying to keep hydrated! lol^^
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  • From ANON - Pickles on January 03, 2006
    You say this was inspired by a doujinshi? Did you buy it for yourself or did you download it somewhere? If you downloaded it, would you mine telling me where I could get it? There's nothing better than a good Roy/Ed doujinshi...
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  • From ANON - milky on January 03, 2006
    XD Hey, smut is smut - so far, you're MY hero for doing something different. I can't count the number of times there's been RoyEd office sex, where Ed is just Randomly Pissy - instead, you used a part of the series where *gasp* emotions were running high for a REAL reason. Bravo. Still desperate for more of this, though - you left us (and Ed) hanging! Evil! :D Do you have a livejournal or something like that where you update? I don't check AFFN very often, but LJ I am addicted to f^^;
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  • From ANON - ibshafer on January 03, 2006
    Thanks, dearie! I like the introspection, too!
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  • From ANON - Hauntedangel (too damn lazy to sign in yet) on January 03, 2006
    OH MY GOD YOU"RE EVIL! Seriously.... but I still love ya! Good work. Keep it up. I like the more introspective version of the chappie.
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 03, 2006
    Oh, never fear,your story is never going to get more than me drooling over my keyboard! I think that my comp really hates you right now for it! ^^lol

    I fear that I may never be normal again while reviewing! *cries* Oh normalcy, I never knew ye... ^^

    lol

    Sadly, what I just sad was true!! I have never been normal *sniffles* BUt, as they say, you can't really miss what you never had, ne? ANd I have a much better time being my weird self!! ^^

    So, rock on!
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 03, 2006
    *drools*

    *whistles loudly* Woohoo!! Rock on! I loved it! I cant wait till the next chapter! Very in-depth, I think!

    ~For years now, he’d been studiously avoiding, both in internal conversations (yes, he talked to himself!)~

    That part was my favorite! ANd when you talked about the mother with tots and some of the men, even Havoc... ^^ The mom-parts were kinda creepy, but I guess I could understand, though I wouldn't have any tots holding /me/ back... ^^lol


    A superb job, I must say! ANd it was a lot better than the partial, I think!
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on January 02, 2006
    evil, evil EVIL stopping point... and it seems like there are an awful lot of horny gay men in central...
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  • From ANON - milky on January 02, 2006
    :O You evil, evil temptress! What do you mean, there isn't any more!? It's so brilliant...

    *clings*
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  • From milky on December 31, 2005
    Mmm mmm good! The first chapter didn't really catch my attention...BUT OMG THIS SECOND PART HAS! It's got a nice blend of humor and smut and it's absolutely adorable :) I do hope you're going to continue this, it's so cute. And the urgency is really, really sexy
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  • From ANON - Arra on December 30, 2005
    Nice. Very nice. I want another encounter with Roy and Ed. The first you wrote was so damn hot. ^_^
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