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By : Kousuke
  • From ANON - creamybluebluebaby on January 31, 2006
    man this is once again nothing short then perfect i dont know what it is but i cant stop reading this story look what you did you got me hooked to your story i hope your happy with your self lol. but i love it so far so keep up the good work and do the next chappy make me proud ok lol

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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 30, 2006
    I don't know why you insist on asking if we enjoyed it! The answer is YES of course! ^^ I loved it!

    My favorite part was ~Ed continued chewing not wanting to open his mouth for anything. Still, the genius chef deserved to be complimented for his amazing feat, "IT'S AMAZING!!!!!" Ed yelled, spewing pieces of intestine everywhere, including Roy's face. Ed frowned at the loss of flavor, but soon forgot it as he popped another one in his mouth, deciding better than to speak again for fear of losing more.~

    ^^ I agree with Mustang!

    Octopus? Ecck!

    Though, if it was shark.... thats a different story.

    That or crabs, considering I live right near the water! If you don't love crabs, you ain't from Maryland! ^^lol

    Its like a requirement to like, if not /all/ seafood, then at LEAST crabs! ^^

    And I felt sooo sad hearing about Roy's other secretary!

    And him being like secret police is really killing me! ^^

    Its soooo funny and reminds me of Mr. and Mrs. Smith!

    I just watched it a few days ago for the first time! it was hilarious!

    My ma hated it though.... *sigh* You can't please everyone, I guess...

    And Ed being compared to a wife?

    I reeeeeaaaaalllllllllyyyy don't think he'd like it, but it was a funny idea! *grins*

    His, errr, /unique/ beauty does help him out there.... ^^
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 30, 2006
    *pulls out a dog whistle*

    *blows whistle* *taps foot impatiently*

    *suddenly there is a stampede and ten State Alchemists appear in front of her, pushing and shoving to get attention*

    *grins* Hello Boys. Build me a house! *Immediately they get to work, trying to outdo each other*

    Well, if there wasn't one before, my Dogs will /make/ one for me... After all, I'm in for the long hall, might as well be comfy while I wait.

    GET ME A SODA!

    *One ALchemist breaks away from the quickly-raising house to disappear behind somewhere, and comes back bringing a drink*

    *grins* Awww! This is the life! The Gutters aren't so bad, once you decide to stay! ^^lol



    I loved the chapter! I hope that Ed doesn't get hurt by Roy's job! But it was great finding out what he does! SO he /does/ know alchemy! ^^ *Suddenly gets down* Damn! There wentr my theory for Ed controlling the fun in bed! You ruined my dreams! ^^lol Not really!

    I can't wait to read a /ssssssstttttteeeeaaaammmmmyyyy/ chapter of Roy and Ed together! *drools*

    How Ed got Al out of the room, sadly, is /very/ believable! I could see it happening in the show (if this really happened)! ^^
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 30, 2006
    *Drools* Lucky ed I love takoyaki. Anyways uh huh! So the way to Ed's heart is through his stomach first. Heh That was a cute chapter loved the last part where Roy kissed and tucked Ed in well is it called tucked in even if its a couch? So cute! Now on with the smut. LOL Jk jk jk =3 Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 30, 2006
    -clears throat and taps foot.- What did I tell you before? Didn't I tell you that your not allowed to stop typing? -is slowly pulling out gun-
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 29, 2006
    -Raises hand- When the hell did the two get togeather? And for how long? I'm seriously confused about this chapter. I went back to read the last chappy to see that it wasn't in there. Just Ed being the ass that he is. So I'm confuzled with this.
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  • From ANON - Luca on January 29, 2006
    Crikey! Please update! Please please please!!

    XD I am hooked!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 29, 2006
    That was so cute! I mean when Roy was picking on Ed! I cracked up poor Ed he didn't get to say any good come backs. Oh roy has an awesome sounding job. Oh oh how did they become a couple? I mean will you give us like a quick flashback on how they actually started feeling something towards each other. I liked this chapter, great job as always. Update soon. Can't wait. =3
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  • From ANON - Asha Crone on January 28, 2006
    Okay, well, the one problem I have with this is that you had utterly no story on how Roy and Ed got together. It may have been four years, but honestly. If Ed had been raped, it would be a long and torturous process to get him to let Roy that close. That would be a great story, getting them into a relationship, and its what I had been looking forward to. Age Ed, sure. But don't just say "boyfriend" right away. Not to mention Roy being guilty about wanting someone he'd raised, someone so much younger than he was.
    Plot points aside, I didn't notice any glaring spelling or grammar errors. So technically it was good. Good luck writing.
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  • From ANON - Suicievampire on January 27, 2006
    Roys a hit man he kills people for a living
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  • From ANON - IceAngel's Hikari on January 26, 2006
    Love it!! love it!! love it!! please keep going and update very very soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 26, 2006
    Loved Ed being a shopoholic! XD Loved when roy asked him about the toy and his response was watchamacallit. Or whatever. can't remember how to spell it. ^^;;;; Anyways oh oh i know what Roy is, An assassin!!! XD NO no a spy! Like James Bond!! Oooo Roy being a spy how hot...an assasin even hotter. Anyways loved the fluff at the end so sweet. Update soon. =3
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 25, 2006
    If I was more awake and if it wasn't the middle of the night, I would know what Roy did for a living. But unforently I'm half awake and out of it. But I must say this: I love this story!!!!!!!!! -glares- You must write more. I need more to live
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 25, 2006
    Is he really bipolar? *cries* There goes my dreams of him being the perfect guy! *Pauses* But then again, he's gonna be with Roy anyways... *cries harder* Now I'll never find the perfect guy!

    ^^lol Actually, I'm thinking of looking up real estate in those gutters... How much is a three bedrooms house there? I need lotsa space for my Ed plushie, books, and torture room for evil characters... And how good is the view? ^^lol

    I can't wait to see the next chapter! Ed was acting just like a girl! *giggles madly* Me, I don't really do the shopping thing (unless it has manga or anime involved, or I suddenly have the urge to shop ^^'') very much, but it was hilarious!

    So Roy doesn't do alchemy in this? I guess Ed can't always be /too/ submissive in the bed with the perv! ^^ Its good he'll have the alchemy as a powering tool... ^^

    And as for my guess for what Roy is... I say he's a SPY!! Or a like secret agent man or something! Or a thief! Or a.... hmmmm.... what are those people how are "companions" to clients in established businesses for dates and such? I can't remember...

    *Pats Ed-kun plushie on the head* Ed-kun let out all his steam and is sleepin right now (thank the gods!) *whispers* He's such a handfull for such a sm- /CUTE, I MEANT CUTE/ plushie. ^^lol

    I am starting to feel curious at when Roy finds out about what happened to Ed before he and Al went to Winry's though... Its starting to make me nuts! ^^lol ANd poor Roy-roy! Loosing his parents in an accident... It makes you just want to shove him and Ed in a closet with handcuffs and chocolate sauce... *drools*
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  • From ANON - creamybluebluebaby on January 25, 2006
    man i dont no what it is but i looooooooooooooove this story so much i saved what uhad so far on my computer and im so happy u just gave us the ninth chappy!!!!!!! u should like get a reward or somethin for this story so update quick because i cant wait to see what happens next!!
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