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By : Kousuke
  • From ANON - Nagi on January 25, 2006
    Wow! Love this, it's a great idea and an excellent story. I hope that alchemy is real! That would just be too neat. ^_^ It'd definitely amaze poor Roy, too. I like the little talk they had at the end, it was very sweet. Maybe Ed will quit terorizing now.

    Can't wait to see some more of this!
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  • From ANON - Kai on January 24, 2006
    YOU! HOW DARE YOU STOP WRITING! WRITE MORE! I COMMAND YOU TO!!!!!!!!! But seriously, I loved it! I found this chapter too amusing and quiet funny
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  • From ANON - creamybluebluebaby on January 24, 2006
    HEY I JUST STARTED READING THIS STORY. NOT MANY PEOPLE CAN MAKE FMA STORYS THAT CAN KEEP MY ATTENTION BUT YOU HAVE THE STORY SO FAR IS GREAT AND I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND KNOW THAT U ARE LOVED BY THE YOUNG ONE WHICH IS ME IM ONLY 17 LOL WELL HAVE FUN WITH IT AND I CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPPYS COME OUT
    LOVE,
    CREAM
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 23, 2006
    You love being evil *cries* I don't! ^^lol But anyways, I loved it! The milk scene was hilarious! ^^ Me, I don't care for milk either (I'm sprt of allergic to it, actually), so I can understand poor Ed-kun! ^^

    And the mess WASN"T Ed's fault. Bad Roy! pervert! Hentai! Bastard Colonel!

    lol I love Ed's pet-names for the perv... hee hee!

    My favorite part was ~"Is he bipolar or something?" he whispered to Al.~ ^^ it was fun-e! And so was ~"How...you...but...you're not my brother!" ~ That was great too!

    And I can't wait till Ed's older and looks back at what he said when he came to Roy's house... I wonder how many new shades of red he'll create? ^^lol

    I got one of my grades from midterms... Crafts, and I passed it with flying colors! ^^ The math one, I didn't even get completed all the way, and they didn't give us extra time *sigh* I'm just hoping for a 'D' to say I passed... -_- Math is just not meant to go in to my brain.. I should have stopped while I was ahead (when I finally learned how todo division, multiplying, adding, and subtracting...-_-'') And I got my English grade from my semster class! I gots a B! Hurray! ^^lol

    Congrats with your 'A's! *wink wink, nudge nudge*lol

    And thank you for the milk scene! *sniffles* It makes a girl proud to read about little growing up boys refusing milk... *big grin*

    And Ed getting excited *wiggles eyeborows* over the /cooking/.... Sadly my mind is so in the gutters by this no matter what you say! ^^lol

    And Roy being the uke is like.... President Bush pulling out of Iraq! ^^lol Ed is just tooo adorable cute and girly: perfect for being uke... Also *whispers* he's too ......short

    BAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(sound-barrier breaks)


    *The plushie of Edward had come to life and is screaming in her ears*
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 23, 2006
    Loved it! Loved Ed not knowing Roy's name. So cute and hilarious. Loved it. And him rushing to clean up the milk! CUTE CUTE! Update soon cause you got me curious on the next chapter. Till next time =3
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on January 19, 2006
    Holy Croap, *42* rooms? Now i really wanna know what your world's roy does for a living. geebus! 0_o
    * cheers on roy - go, win the the little bugger over with books!*
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 19, 2006
    Wow Ed is a brat.NO NO DON"T KILL ME!! I love Ed! I love his attitude!! He is so cute like that. Heh roy is going to have a handful with him. =3 Great chapter as always yay they are home!!! ^o^ Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 18, 2006
    *finishes pitchfork poking to read chapter and review*

    ~...his golden eyes widened, "It's...huge!" Ed said, mouth hanging open~
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Not laugh? How can i /not? Oh, this was my favorite part!!! Definitely!

    I can't wait for the next chapter... We have midterms this week, and I'm almost done! *hurray* I can understand your "reasons" ^^lol

    I hope that there is a milk incident in the next chapter with Roy cooking... That'd be a real good idea... Oh, I can't wait! I'd like to see how Ed would fall for Roy just by cooking! ^^ tee! It would be just great! And Al could be the son they'd never have! lol Ed could be the mama, of course! He's just too kawaii to be seme! UKE ED-kun ALL THE WAY! *goes on cheering*


    Now that I've completed this review *brandishs a flaming torch* its time to visit my toy Jimmy.... *whistles nonchalantly*
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  • From ANON - Lilitha on January 16, 2006
    This is a great fanfic so far and I can not wait for the next chapter. Though I feel sorry for poor Ed and Al. *Pets them on their head.* XD
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 16, 2006
    It was worth a review. Cause yay!!! Ed accepted Roy! I mean well not yet but still he said yes to go with him. Yay now Ed and Al have a home! Yay! ^^ Hee good chapter I think. Nice one.
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on January 15, 2006
    meant no disrespect. Some people just honestly don't think about the logistics of the plots they set up, and that bit was nagging at me.
    I very much like this concept, and it's pretty well written.
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  • From ANON - Pepp on January 15, 2006
    ^^ Hurray! Bonzai and all that good stuff! ^^ A new chapter! I missed it! And it was a great chapter too! i loved it! And that Jimmy brat should get his!! *grr* Messing with poor Al! Ed-kun should beat him blue! ^^lol And i can't wait to find out how everything goes! How Ed explained his decision was very believable! ^^ *hugs* I can't wait till the next chapter! It should be great! Don't take too long! And ignore those irritating reviewers being rude, if they are I mean... Some people have no tack... -_-; Sadly, I'm one of them! ^^lol But thats ok!
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  • From ANON - kit master on January 15, 2006
    YAY!! i hope that they get along well. I'm like in love with this story right now! XD


    je ne

    kitsune master no hentai
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  • From ANON - happyonna on January 15, 2006
    Very enjoyable. :D In chapter six I rather expected to find Ed showing up and beating those boys then wailing on Roy but I was pleasantly surprised. :):) More chapters soon please!
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on January 12, 2006
    Winry doesn't do any kind of background checks? no questions about how the prospective adopter lives, does he/she have a job, stuff like that?
    just "Hi, i want a kid", "Okay."? it doesn't seem very realistic.
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