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By : Kousuke
  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on June 16, 2007
    Oh...my...GOD!! I can't believe it!! I just can't believe it!! You killed them!! You actually killed Roy and Ed!! *gasps* Oh dear Lord!! *clutches stomach fighting back a wave of nausea* I feel like I've been kicked in the gut!! *head reels and stomach churns* Oh man, that hurts my heart. I'm just stunned, shocked really. I so did not see that one coming! I never saw Spiral nor do I know anything about it but that didn't lessen the impact of what happened at the end of this story. Why in the name of all that is sacred and holy did Al go off with this Kanone freak?!?! WTH?!? Al may not be the brightest bulb in the box but really? seriously? just walk away with this psycho after just witnessing everything he'd done?? just leave your beloved brother and father figure lying there and never look back to mourn them?!? Al! Have you no heart?!? or common sense?!? *shakes head sadly* Oh Al, I never would have dreamed that you valued proving your existence over doing the right thing so much. Did Kanone abandon Winry, injuries and all, to fend for herself? Will she go back to him? Guess I'll never know the answers to these questions since you said somewhere in one of the middle chapters (I started reading this just a few days ago just so you know) that there were 29 chapters to this story making this the end. But, you know what? I don't think I really want answers to those questions. No, I don't really wanna know. That was one hell of an ending and anything else would spoil it. It killed me no end and, yes, I cried if you must know, but Roy and Ed died a truly beautiful death. If only Ed could have heard Roy tell him he loved him one more time. *wibbles* Fate is indeed that cruel. *sobs*
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 12, 2007
    Wow, um that was alot to take in. Should this maybe have been in crossovers? I really hate Kanone, what a jerk! I can't believe you killed Roy and Ed off!

    *head still realing*
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 12, 2007
    This is an intersting take on the elric brothers beginning! I can't wait to find out how your plot progresses!
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  • From ANON - Frozen_taho on October 02, 2006
    Why, my sweet, bring Spiral into this? The series didnt even have the decency to finish itself. I still dont know what the hell the Blade Children are and why they're all so morbid.
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on August 28, 2006
    oh what happens, what happens?! and, spiral? is this turning into a crossover? ^____~ keep up the great work, this story is so interesting!
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  • From ANON - michelle sanders on August 04, 2006
    um, i just found this but i hope you update. i want to find out when they started dating. and roy has to tell ed that he means it.
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  • From ANON - TrulyWished on June 26, 2006
    I love this story, I've had it bookmarked since I started reading fanfics, was one of the first I found. Thanks for reviewing my stuff btw.
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  • From ANON - Kai on February 05, 2006
    -sits back and crosses arms, snickering- I knew it. I knew that Roy would have order's about Ed. What... that I didn't know. I'm not god, I cant see the furture. But I can see yours and its not going to be pretty if you dont update.
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  • From ANON - Juna on February 05, 2006
    OMG! What will happen? That mean mean boss guy! And omg poor Ed!! *Hugs the blonde alchemist* My poor sexy baby!! Roy: ¬_¬ Ed: O_O;;;;;;;; *cries* You had such an awful life but now you have Roy to hold and love you and make you forget and feed you and you have Al who is sweet and caring and gentle and would always be there and sorry this review is going no where. -_-;;;; Loved the chapter loved the fluff. And who dare hurt Ed when he was young? Who!! Roy should meet up with that bastard and make him pay or uh her..or it cause well not sure if Ed was raped by a guy so yeah.(GUessing he was cause well duh) Anyways sorry for the long and random review. Sorry. Loved the chapter and cannot wait to read more and read some smut >>
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  • From ANON - tte on February 04, 2006
    WTF?? Where's the chapter?
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  • From ANON - creamybluebluebaby on February 03, 2006
    yeah this chappy was good and it was funny as well i dont mean to put the squezze on u but i just love this story as i said for the 15th time lol. well come out with the next chappy because it became one of my daily things to read this story when im not doing evrything else.have fun with it lol
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on February 03, 2006
    I have one thing that I've been wondering about that you never addressed. Does Roy know that Ed was raped and was anything done to help him get past it. Because it seems like it was something that was a major source of problems and then you just didn't mention it ever again. I'm assuming based on something you said, about him letting Roy touch him, that they'd worked towards him getting over it. But you never said, so I don't know if what happened was a more realistic situation of them having to work through it slowly or the more unrealistic situation of "Oh well, I was raped. Let me just go on to have sex with the first person who tries" I really wish that had been addressed because that's something I've definitely been wondering about.
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  • From ANON - Juna on February 03, 2006
    *Cries with Ed* Whaaaaaaaaaa poor Ed getting hurt!! Gah Roy make it up to him! more food! Then smut! JK JK Or am i? >> Anywas i was Awwwww when Al was with roy and it was the whole father ,son moment. How cute!! Al is such a sweetie!! Gosh i hope he can make Ed understand so that way when roy comes home he will find Ed dressed up in sexy lingerie ready for some smut and forgiving. XD JK JK JK I am sorry i am a girl who enjoys her smut between these two. Ahem. Loved the chapter. Hmmmm curious on who called Roy out. I'm calling you out. Get it? Sorry random right there. =P Update soon cause i love this story =3
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  • From ANON - Kai on February 02, 2006
    -blinks- I didn't know I was now your master, but that's a thought I shall keep in mind. So what shall I say now? -clears throat- I really can see where this is going. I really can, so I have something to say that I always do. KEEP WRITING DAMN IT!
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  • From ANON - Pepp on February 02, 2006
    Yep! I was born and raised in St. Mary's ^^lol Yeah! Shark is pretty good (once you get used to it).... I didn't like it at first, but /I/ think it tastes a little like bass... Though thats just my opinion....


    *clasps hands together* Poor Ed-kun! Roy-Bastard's lies have hurt him so! *cries*

    Though it was surrounded by misery, my favorite part of it, and probably the most funny part of it was:

    ~"Just don't let him trash my house." he called to Al.

    "Okay!" Al called back, waving.~

    ^^ I liked it! And *bursts out laughing* I suppose you couldn't use anything /but/ sore or stiff in that sentence, could you? Still got me thinking dirty thoughts! ^^ hee

    I wonder who called Roy?

    And I /guess/ I could understand that he was only protecting Ed and Al (grumbles for five minutes) from the truth, but still! *whines* Ed /trusted/ him!

    And he's STILL keeping the whole truth from them! Not telling them about him going after Alchemists! They might be in danger!!! Oh no!!!!

    Roy better make up with Ed! And be Ed-kun's SLAVE for a YEAR for lying to him! *grrrr* ^^lol

    I can't wait till the next chapter! I'm so excited! *claps hands and jumps up and down* Woo hoo! Hurray!
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