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Reviews for Cruelty in the dark room

By : Ayden
  • From Juggalette17 on November 16, 2006
    I understadn teh issues with English so I don't hold it against you, i promise. Actually it's been surprisingly easy to over look them. I like the story concept you have. Though parts do make me twitchy at times...But I'm sure I've written worse in my time. Keep up the good work. If you ever need a beta let me know. I'm a grammar and spelling freak so I don't mind looking over others work. I do it for my friends all the time. JB
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  • From ANON - lily. xD on July 19, 2006
    =D I really liked your stories! I was so hooked; although there were some mistaked but i understood then anyways; lol. I read all the chaptersin less then half an hour. *feels proud* XD
    And I see you're searching for a new beta again. If you're interested; I'd love to be that person. n.n
    I'd love to help you with anything I can. I'm totally up for the job. xD And I'm definately capable.
    If you can; please email me about it. (: Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - juna on June 12, 2006
    I haven't left you!!!! *cries* i just never got any of your emails!!! I always checked and checked but nothing. Could be my email is acting up T_T I am sorry! Buut no i haven't left you! I still enjoy being your beta cause i love your story!!! Keep it up! And email me i need to see if the stupid thing is working, or else i will give you anotehr email. ^-^ Update soon ya? =3
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 11, 2006
    Dark story but it is addictive.
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  • From Ayden on May 31, 2006
    Heh, it's good that Quadrian got it out of his heart :D If fanfiction and yaoi really bothers him that much, why does he read them? And if he just comes here to tell that he hates yaoi, that just shows he being childish and narrowminded. And who cares that he has a girlfriend who is bi? It's everybodys own thing to write yaoi or yuri or just read the fics. If he has to come and complain about this and that, then let him be :D I am waiting for his respons, because these people are so stupid XD Even if I don't like for instance religions, I am not yelling straight to their faces that religions should be removed from the world. That guy really should go home and grow up few years, then show up again.
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  • From ANON - Quadrius on May 31, 2006
    ... You, ALL OF YOU, are the reason why whatever powers there may be hate fangirls.

    1. KEEP THE YAOI IN THE YAOI SECTION. JHC.
    2. ... Why do Fangirls enjoy doing fics of their favorite male characters fucking? I mean, really. (Oh, and before you play the old "Omg you just dont like gays" card, my girlfriend is bi. And, I don't write Yuri. So there.
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  • From ANON - sarah on May 30, 2006
    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!! AWESOME JOB! PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I don't want roy to go bad again. i think it would mess up the story and i wanna know what happned that night. after roy got on top of ed you cut it off??!!! did ed admit to loving roy or did roy admit to loving ed and ed agreed to it or something??? and thats why roy is all happy today and back to almost normal??? PLEASE HURRRY THE SESPENCE IS KILLING ME!!! I hate waiting and the suspence! thanks soooo much
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  • From ANON - Juna on May 29, 2006
    yay the new chapter i liked it, i can't wait for the update and i do not think you will screw this story up ^^ It is coming out real good ya? =3
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  • From ANON - ShishoKat on March 10, 2006
    Good job! Good story!
    Keep up the good work......
    (yes, it's dark but not too dark and not too strange)
    :)

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  • From ANON - Lolichan on January 21, 2006
    Yay! I like it!!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 19, 2006
    AHHHHHH!!! ed was so cute in this chapter!! Like a little boy!!! So cute!! I want to hug him! Loved how he was acting. And nuts no raping in the ferris wheel ride? XD Only kidding. Oh oh I can beta for you if you like just email me if you want my help. =3 Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Arra on January 18, 2006
    Awwww! That was sooo adorable. Very OOC. But do I care? Duh-uh. I don't. It was so sweet. Let those dark feelings fade away! Please let them make love in the Farris Wheel or whatever it was called. Let Roy be gentle. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mustang on January 18, 2006
    Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! T T Damn j00 and j00r no ferris wheel rape-ness! I pout at you! *pout*
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  • From ANON - Arra on January 15, 2006
    I am not English myself, but I think you don't have to worry too much about your English, I think it's quite good. The only thing I really miss in this story is lube! When two males make love you need lube, or it will certainly hurt for the one getting something inside of him. So, add some lube to this story! Apart from that, the story is good. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 15, 2006
    Yeah amusement park time! Loved the whole Ed asking him to go with him. SO cute of making him ask i was expecting Roy but i liked ed making the suggestion and asking him to win him a teddy. So cute!! Anyways loved that you added the whole sense of dark roy and i hope you keep that up. It is the battle of the emotions for Roy! Oh oh let them have cotton candy! XD i am a dork. Oh oh and ride the ferris wheel! That would be romantic oh but then make Roy go back to his evil ness and try to rape Ed in the ferris wheel cart/thingy....O_o. Okay no wait what am i saying. =P Sorry your story heh. Oh and your english is actually good. you do miss 'the' but i don't care cause i like your story alot. Keep it up. can't wait for the update =3
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