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Reviews for Cruelty in the dark room

By : Ayden
  • From ANON - Mustang on January 15, 2006
    Ish me again! ^ ^

    For someone who lives in Finland, you've got better english than most people with English as their first language.... > >;



    Ah, such a lovely chapter... -^ . ^-

    Love the lemon, love the lemon *nuzzles the lemon*. XD I'm a little...out of my right mind at the current moment so don't mind me. ^^;



    And update sooooooon-ness!
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  • From ANON - Juna on January 14, 2006
    Omg! Roy so cruel...well maybe..i dunno i just love it! I was actually sad reading what Ed said to roy about him not wanting to hurt just be loved. So sad. *Hugs Ed and cries a river* Ed and Roy: O_O
    I loved it, oh oh they should go to an amusment park! They are so fun! Wait are there amusment parks in their time? *Ponders* Update soon =3
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  • From ANON - me on January 13, 2006
    omigod i love.............................it
    joo haf to finish it

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  • From ANON - ItachiSasuke on January 13, 2006
    I'm not exactly sure if this is a good idea, but maybe you should make it so that Roy is struggling to be the loving/gentle guy that Ed wants him to be and the cruel guy that he used to be. So like he tries being nice but sometimes he goes to far and ends up hurting Ed again... ugh i really don't know, lol. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 11, 2006
    OMG!! Yes you are making it a story! yay!! I love it!! love the whoel asking ed out on a date but how will he act? That is the question? Anyways great job love it love the feel of dark in it...oooo darkness XD Please update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - K on January 11, 2006
    Aww, the last chapter is soo cute. i loved it. i really would like it if you continued!
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  • From ANON - Arra on January 11, 2006
    I think it's cute. Roy realizing that he's hurting Ed and not making him feel good. And then asking him out. I sincerely hope that you continue this story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - K on January 05, 2006
    This is GREAT! UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Ri on January 03, 2006
    I say it was good and hot and nice and steamy and i was sad at the ending part. That was sad. T_T Good job i think ^^
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  • From ANON - KousukeAsazuki on January 03, 2006
    Heh, well, you know what they say: You always hurt the ones you love. Is that what you were aiming for? If not, then I am a bit confused by the ending. Though, I think Ed might be addicted to the pain, or else why would he keep coming back? Either way, good job!
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  • From ANON - Pickles on January 03, 2006
    Not bad. The end was a little confusing... But I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Mustang on January 03, 2006
    Ooh hoo hoo! I like this... ^ ^ *purrs* Edo-rapage is always great. *nod nod* Great character torture.





    Have you read Blue Flame, by any chance? It's a Roy/Ed doujin. It's kinda like this.
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