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Reviews for Weak as I am

By : SaiyanPride
  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2006
    I really like this story. I'm usually not a big fan of yaoi, but this one is really good! Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on January 07, 2006


    I'm only on chapter four thusfar, the plotline is good, action and characterization are a little thin but completely acceptable. the only issue I have is with your third person, present-tense. I've never liked present tense, even in first-person voice, but it is _only_ appropriate in first person. you need to edit this into past tense since you are using third person voice.


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