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Reviews for Fallen

By : LadySilkheart
  • From ANON - SakuraSagara on August 18, 2006
    Ag! I love this story! PLEASE continue it soon! I need more stoic Bra and clueless family stuff! BTW, is the rapist Yamcha or something?
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 04, 2006
    OMG... If it is who I think it is... that ROTTEN BASTARD. Oh, I hope you update soon... these little glimpses are killing me.


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  • From ANON - Sunane_no_Maike on February 02, 2006
    Great story so far, like the way you take your time developing your story while taking care not to dwell on less important details. Keep on going! By the way, I rated every chap. of Fallen 5* cause I think they earn em! Love, Maike
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  • From ANON - shellie bean on January 15, 2006
    WOW! That was captivating! I can't wait for more Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on January 09, 2006
    I'm glad you're posting this again. I know who the abd man is, cause I read it before... if I'm not mistaken.

    Anyway, I hope Goten learns the truth of what happened to his crush a lot sooner this time!
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 08, 2006
    I think the first person point of view was okay for the prolog. I am glad you switched over to third person for the actual story.

    Longer chapter next time please?

    This one was good, in that everyone is still feeling eachother out. I want to get to the confrontation part where Bra actaully has to tell someone what happened.
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 07, 2006
    I think it is an interesting start, and the mystery you've created about 'that day' is something I just have to know now. I have a feeling I know what, but I don't know the who.
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